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A road taken by those who decide

see your own reflection upon those who died

from this path you cant turn back

your future secured by the past

within the battle I cast aside

the shells that took all of your lifes

with my eye I lock my sights

I take the lead and you look up to the sky

to the doomed I say goodbye

through the view I see you die

when the cold desert comes

just close your eyes your job is done

when time has glazed your eyes

let the fading dream subside

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When I first read this I didn't really connect with it. After a couple of days I read it again and I really enjoyed it.

You are talking about a sniper right?

"the shells that took all of your lifes"

Minor spelling mistake... it's LIVES not lifes...

"with my eye I lock my sights

I take the lead and you look up to the sky

to the doomed I say goodbye

through the view I see you die"

Above is my favorite part... very nicely written! :)

~TIMOTHY~

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