Fly Awake

[Mazrocon]

Hey guys... Maz here.... Been awhile!! Anyways I got a new poem... sort of different (as usual). For some reason it kinda ended up being a hymn-like poem.... Very short but hope you like!




This poem has been deleted due to possible publication.

Edited November 2, 2014 by Mazrocon

[Alyricman]

Hi Maz, glad to see you again on the forum. Yes, it is short, but you expressed a lot through these lines. Very inspiring and thoughtful... You're back with a good stuff.

[Mazrocon]

Hey thanks man, for checking 'em out.. much appreciated!

I wish I could be bringing some more lyrics to the board, but for some reason poetry is only coming to my mind

~TIMOTHY~

[puroamericano10]

Hey guys... Maz here.... Been awhile!! Anyways I got a new poem... sort of different (as usual). For some reason it kinda ended up being a hymn-like poem.... Very short but hope you like!

A great, spirited title you have to this one, Timothy.

I think it has the versatile quality of being both a

song and a poem (or maybe that's just what I consider

hymn-like arrangements to be)

When the day has passed and the night has come,

Nothing left for me but the setting sun,

I will not despair, merely fly awake,

Light as air, for there's nothing I will take.

When the crowds scatter I will walk straight.

The hour is nigh and so I shan't debate.

The new skin, my own, the old me has died.

When the storm clouds gather I will not hide.

And as I gaze into my makers face

I will not fall in guilt but bow in grace.

And I will sing a joyous song of praise.

When the time comes and through out all my days.

A very candid and solemn hymn

Spectacular!

Regards,

Puro

[jimharmon]

As usual , you amaze me. The simplicity and clarity along with the obvious belief is wonderful.

[Mazrocon]

Thanks you two! Love your comments!

Glad you like!

~TIMOTHY~