My Newest Song "don't Come Crying To Me"

[Eric James McClellan]

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Edited August 11, 2012 by tunesmithth
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[BefallenSoul87]

I really like this song! It holds a LOT of potential to become a pretty large hit. I do not have an connections in the business but from songs that I hear on the radio compared to the pontential in this song. There should be no trouble with this one becoming successful. The topic of the song is there, there is a good melody throughout and it has a hook. I wish so badly that I did have connections or the ability to do session work on this song. I can hear so many possibilities in this song that it is crazy. Now that I have addressed the positives I will have to address the only negatives to this performance. Personally I think you could use a little more confidence in your presence. Your voice is great this track but perhaps you could sing more with your diaphram than you nasal passages. The guitar performance left some to be desired as well but I understand that this is one of those "one off" performances that is meant to just get the song out there to the public. Those are my only complaints to the track. Other than very minor performance issues, I think that is one of the better songs I have heard from an independant artists in a long time.

I also listened to a couple your other tacks. They were good but not quite as good as this one. This could have something to do with the lack of projection in the vocals or the melody was not quite there as it should be. Keep up the good work and I look forward to hearing more from you.