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BefallenSoul87

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  1. Hello everyone. Hope all is well in your respective worlds. I thought I would give this a shot and see what everyone though of my original work. One of the tracks is a collaboration with another guitarist but other than that everything was written and recorded by myself. The drum tracks are done with Acoustica Beatcraft so that would be why they sound quite stiff and robotic. The tracks span from 2008-2011. I will supply a link to my Soundcloud page. http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q%5Bfulltext%5D=Sevens+Divide Hope you enjoy the tracks and feedback, positive or negative, is greatly appreciated. So long as it is constructive.
  2. I really like this song! It holds a LOT of potential to become a pretty large hit. I do not have an connections in the business but from songs that I hear on the radio compared to the pontential in this song. There should be no trouble with this one becoming successful. The topic of the song is there, there is a good melody throughout and it has a hook. I wish so badly that I did have connections or the ability to do session work on this song. I can hear so many possibilities in this song that it is crazy. Now that I have addressed the positives I will have to address the only negatives to this performance. Personally I think you could use a little more confidence in your presence. Your voice is great this track but perhaps you could sing more with your diaphram than you nasal passages. The guitar performance left some to be desired as well but I understand that this is one of those "one off" performances that is meant to just get the song out there to the public. Those are my only complaints to the track. Other than very minor performance issues, I think that is one of the better songs I have heard from an independant artists in a long time. I also listened to a couple your other tacks. They were good but not quite as good as this one. This could have something to do with the lack of projection in the vocals or the melody was not quite there as it should be. Keep up the good work and I look forward to hearing more from you.
  3. Sounds good to my ears. But I happen to enjoy the sounds of Bob Dylan and Lou Reed, which is the feel that this song has. I certainly needs a little work but it has potential in the market for obscure music. I will be honest here and say that if comercial success is your goal then the melody on this track will not cut it. That being said, do not change the melody. Perhaps bring the guitar up some so that it sits well with the vocals. Perhaps add some harmonica or violin to it, if that is possible at all. In all, this is a good track.
  4. Welcome to the forums BefallenSoul87 :)

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