Titles Are Overrated

[Blindkid]

As my flaws reach an all time high

Bleeding, fleeting lights do blind 

Like speeding cars do tempt the lines

These thoughts undoing tempt my mind

Alongside numbers bent to rise

Raindrops hail to this falling sky

For what is home but my disguise

For where is home but in your eyes 

[x_*kate*_x]

hey there, i really like the line "For what is home but my disguise", it sounds like something i can relate to.I honestly wish i had come up with that line years ago! keep on writing!

[skittles]

i agree the last 2 lines gave me chills

[john]

nice one. Good title too .) It's what drew me in to have a read lol Some good images though phrasing threw me a vouple of times.