My Life Torn Apart

[KieraPaiige]

Looking back on the years that have escaped me.

wondering how its come to this.

the love i felt as a little girl.

soon turned into tears.

a never ending waterfall.

right from my very eyes.

you didnt love me nor did you care.

and at that im not surprised..

you've turned into a monster.

my mother you are not.

you let him change you piece by piece.

of your children you forgot.

i cant believe you tried to say.

you did really love and care.

the way you've treated myself and my brother.

just really isnt fair!

i tried to be the best i could.

to try and make you proud.

my plan failed, what a silly mistake.

you pushed me to the ground.

the yelling and fighting,

the constant dredded hurt.

didnt do me any good,

you made me feel like Dirt..

Heartaches are all that you shared with me.

not a mothers caring ways.

instead of looking back with joy.

those were the dark and lonely days.

ive learned to love to be kind,

from your demons i am free.

sorry mom im better than you,

ill never be what you tried to make of me.

[purevintage]

Wow, this is chilling in a way. It reminds me of some poems I've read in the Chicken Soup for the Soul books.

Favorite Line:

"ive learned to love to be kind,
from your demons i am free.
sorry mom im better than you,
ill never be what you tried to make of me"

[KieraPaiige]

Thankyou both  
means alot!

[sara2cena]

You're really good! Keep writing! You'll be a famous poet/lyricist someday since you write amazing lyrics that are simply exquisite.

[infinityandbeyond]

I like it! I agree with the first comment, that it is chilling. I really like how you unfolded a story that wasn't expected. You left alone the reason (mother) in the first verse, like 'this is me now' and THEN explained. It makes the reader feel more. Good job!

[benjo]

hey kiera,

 

 loved this very nice piece thaks for posting take care...

 

"ive learned to love to be kind,
from your demons i am free.
sorry mom im better than you,                      WOW
ill never be what you tried to make of me

Edited June 13, 2013 by benjo