Empty Eyes

[Divinewizadry]

Don't look me in the eye

For the answears i can't provide

I already know the devil has sucked my soul dry

 

You found me when i was lonely

You caught me when i was weak

Listen to my heart darling, I'm only gunna let my mind speak

 

The devil came n sat by myside

All she wanted to do was take a look inside

Before i could refuse and just say NO!!

The time arrived when i could'nt let her GO!!

[JDHarris]

Hey I like it very much, still needs something more though, I think to make it flow I made changes  in the first verse,only as suggestions.  Let me know if it fits with what you were thinking,  if not toss it. 

jdh

 

Don't look me in the eye

For the answers I can't provide

no one is home

I already know the devil sucked my soul dry

 

You found me when i was lonely

You caught me when i was weak

Listen to my heart darling, I'm  gunna let my mind speak

 

The devil came n sat by myside

All she wanted to do was take a look inside

Before i could refuse and just say NO!!

The time arrived when i could'nt let her GO!!

[Itsy Bitsy]

it's short which is fine but I feel you can add more to it.