The Roasted Oldsmobile

[iceracer777]

My friend related a story to me about when he was 18 and in the Air Force. Seems he had a fling with some Major's wife and it ended on a very sour note. Here's Mr. Slick-

 

 

Mr. Slick

 

My Father gave me his Pride and Joy.

"Take good care of my shiny Blue Toy"

I kinda let him down a bit.

I blew off some Broad and she threw a fit!

 

She had a bunch of Guys,

Take and torch My Powderpuff Ride!!

The Cop said, "You must have Pissed Her Off Son"

"I guess that's what happens when You cut off the Fun!"

 

The Blue Goose looked like a Day old Dead Toad!

It was all sooty Black and about even with the Road!

Just then my Father gave my phone a Ring.

"Hiya Kiddo, How's the Olds Running ?"

 

"I hate to say, but it's Smokin' a bit"

It might be some time before I can get it Fixed!"

"OH, don't worry Son, Just change the oil and filter"

I couldn't tell him the truth, I was way off kilter!

 

I guess I should have let her down easy and not been a snot,

"Cause in the end it cost me Quite a Lot!

But that's my way,

to this very Day!

 

I'm Dan Zick.

But You can call me Mr. Slick!

The Man with the Golden Arm.

I can have any Chick if I just turn on the Charm!

 

ICERACER777

[Kenj]

I'd suggest introducing the colorful lothario character at the beginning, maybe bracket with Dan Zick/Mr. Slick at beginning at end.  Story maybe doesn't quite come together.  What did she do?  There's irony inherent in the last stanza.   Golden Arm dude driving daddy's car and getting it destroyed.  Seems to me there's a lot of laughs there you haven't exploited.