First Recording

[Andrea Bartha]

Hello, Im more a lyric writer, but recorded a song recently with a friend due to a collaboration, would appreciate your opinions and comments!

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yb-6yN8soQ4

[justsoulin]

Hi Andrea, welcome

 

Could I please direct you over to "showcase" or lyric crytique" etc.

 

Here's just for meet and greets of new members.

 

BTW, I know this is going to sound bad but I thought I'd hit the nail on the head, is the vocalist 'not' English or the words not English? The music/arrangement sounds great

[Andrea Bartha]

Hi Andrea, welcome

 

Could I please direct you over to "showcase" or lyric crytique" etc.

 

Here's just for meet and greets of new members.

 

BTW, I know this is going to sound bad but I thought I'd hit the nail on the head, is the vocalist 'not' English or the words not English? The music/arrangement sounds great

you may redirect...im new on this site, and yes im not english....but im singing in english

[justsoulin]

Ah, I didn't know it was you singing Andrea, thought it was your friend. Erm, the reason I asked was a lot of it is unclear as to what it is you're saying/singing, and I've listened a few times (just being honest).

 

I get 'Ocean roaring' first, then 'voice in my head', then 'everything'. I'm only catching odd words or phrases.