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[annakins]

When you start moving forward there's no turning back, to that sad empty place where you fell off the track...... It may be your journey, to take time to heal. The further you get, the better you feel...... Slowly releasing the long years of pain, Then realising they weren't all in vain...... Lessons you've learned while waiting your turn, Be proud - you've worked hard for the peace you have earned...... The Love you deserve you find in your heart, What you're really worth, Who you truly are...... Now you're on track moving at your own pace, No turning back to that sad empty place...... AK

[scotsman89]

very good 

could have been laid out in lines which may have made it easier to read , but a good read 

 

john

[MPerry]

Hello

 

Really great poem filled with inspiration and sage advice, as John said above if this was laid out a little better, it would have made it even better..great job!..Mike

[Anonymous2021]

Nice lines.Its the story of a journey.

 

Journey that was difficult and sad.

Still you wanted to get out of it so bad.

You can do it much better.

Just try adding some more letters