you are the one

[x_*kate*_x]

*YOU ARE THE ONE*

your the one who helps me fly

you make me happy when i cry

you make me believe in myself

when no one else can help

your the one whos on my mind

your the one i thought i'd never find

you stole my heart from me

i hope that you can see

i can be myself around you

i hope you know this is true

you tell me i am beautiful

and that i am wonderful

i like you for who you are

i felt this way from the start

please dont ever change

or we'll end up going our seprate ways

you are the one i want

i wonder if you feel the same

i told you how i feel

and it is all so real!

[kriss]

well done, i'm lovin it loads

peace

kriss

[john]

Hey

I think this pretty good. You could try experimenting with some half rhymes a bit more. It tends to add a subtlety that full rhymes don't.

Nice one Kate!

Cheers

John

[Rudi]

I agree with John re rhymes potential, but it works pdg anyway. Nice one.