New Demo Video - seeking advice & feedback

[Miuzia]

Hey gang!  

 

Would love feedback on this song.  Overall feel, flow, as well as any and all musical and lyrical details that stick out.  Can you imagine any other instrumental parts?  What about tempo?  I’m getting a condenser mic ASAP, so please excuse the possibly annoying sound quality for now.

 

Thanks in advance!

Miu

 

Better Now

Intro
Better, yea I’m feeling better now that you’re gone, you’re gone.
Better, yea I’m feeling better now that you’re gone, you’re gone.

Verse 1

Let go, of the fake show, that we put on, 
No more, it’s a closed door, I’m moving on
Done deal, it’s how I feel, I must stay strong, so long!

Chorus
Heart ache, heart ache, you brought nothing but
All take, all take, I’d give it all up
Heat ache, heart ache, that’s all that you brought

Intro
Better, yea I’m feeling better now that you’re gone, you’re gone.
Better, yea I’m feeling better now that you’re gone, you’re gone.

Verse 2
Secrets,  like a fetus, grow into lies,
Weakness, helped me welcome you into my life
Sleepless, over drama, I’m cutting ties, bye bye!

Chorus

Edited June 22, 2018 by Miuzia