Arrangement - Tell me your opinion, please

[martin1603]

Hello, my name is Martin and I am student in music school in Bulgaria.

I made arrangament on our folk song - "Vecheray, Rado" (Super dinner, Rado). The song is choir, but i try to make for piano and fluete! Please tell me your opinion - I will be happy!

 

PDF FILE of the score- https://dox.abv.bg/download?id=b05bbdc233

 

File - mp3 -(made from program) - It shows the main idea 

- https://dox.abv.bg/download?id=204dbfeec5

 

The original of the song -  

 

[MikeRobinson]

Well, I'd say that you have a very nice ... MP3 ... as though it was very-faithfully produced from ... a score.

 

"So far, so good ..."

 

Next, what I'd suggest to you is ... "relax."  Listen once again to the original performance.  The timing is actually fluid.  The instrumental parts, also.

 

Now, if what you've produced so-far is "a score," and what you've got so-far is a computerized playback from "that score," well, perhaps you've actually reached the limits of what "computer score-writing software" can [be expected to ...] do, in which case you will need to begin explore further options.  

 

(And, full disclosure, "if this be the case, then I know exactly where you're coming from!") ... 😃