Amber

[Saudade]

Invert my walls

Is it an inside worth keeping?

Will you inverse your own, though you've fallen asleep

and the hold that you take is a grip worth a finger

 

Blind-sided paths, yet we end up on many

Number my thoughts; are they too plenty?

Wore extra layers just to remember the winter

A time where the cold was the right kind of cold

 

Progress is made just to be further tested

How can I be concave when the lense is all flat

and my car's just a starter with design to be bested

 

Drove through my life; now I'm patient for truth

I thought that I found it, but lies have a fluke

Run with these legs that are too tired to move

Collide with a master that is too hard to prove

wrong is the season, it's amber, then autumn 

Live for another

Daylight stays on

Daylight is rife

 

The easiest world to get lost in is the one where everything can be found.

So maybe, if you're gone I wouldn't feel so lonely.

The love that weighs none; it might be my only.

I asked for all of these signs; but I justfollowed what I told me.

Edited May 11, 2019 by Saudade

[scotsman89]

Saudade 

this could be good with some work a bit all over the place and hard to read > trim it down make it rhyme a bit more and see what it wants to be 

just my opinion 

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John