What do you think of my rap beat?

[Isaiah Juarez]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sjsq-YBwTbpc8nJRF9ttrZqsvDGjzEsP/view?usp=sharing

 

 

 

 

 

[MikeRobinson]

Can't hear it.

[Isaiah Juarez]

1 hour ago, MikeRobinson said:

Can't hear it.

 

This is the latest update 

 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VrXyzjaxzO5uTysy_7iGgDMFWG8tKz28/view?usp=sharing

[ImKeN]

As is, it sounds very experimental and a little difficult to follow. But keep at it!

 

Ken

[Isaiah Juarez]

10 hours ago, ImKeN said:

As is, it sounds very experimental and a little difficult to follow. But keep at it!

 

Ken

 

This is my latest update in case you haven't heard it.

 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VrXyzjaxzO5uTysy_7iGgDMFWG8tKz28/view?usp=sharing

[MikeRobinson]

Here's my thoughts and suggestions:

• The sounds are very interesting.  ("Very!")

However:

• Right now they have no presentation and no structure.

"Songwriting" is very much(!) "storytelling," whether the song has words or not. A story has structure, and the listener very quickly comes to expect it.  Start with this discussion which was published elsewhere on this(!) site:  https://www.songstuff.com/song-writing/article/song-form-overview/

 

Therefore, you need to think about how to use these sounds that you have made, and to arrange them into a sequence that will be "familiar, therefore engaging, even exciting," to the listener.  Lead them on an interesting journey through your universe of interesting sounds.

[Isaiah Juarez]

On 3/23/2021 at 4:29 PM, MikeRobinson said:

Here's my thoughts and suggestions:

• The sounds are very interesting.  ("Very!")

However:

• Right now they have no presentation and no structure.

"Songwriting" is very much(!) "storytelling," whether the song has words or not. A story has structure, and the listener very quickly comes to expect it.  Start with this discussion which was published elsewhere on this(!) site:  https://www.songstuff.com/song-writing/article/song-form-overview/

 

Therefore, you need to think about how to use these sounds that you have made, and to arrange them into a sequence that will be "familiar, therefore engaging, even exciting," to the listener.  Lead them on an interesting journey through your universe of interesting sounds.

Very true. I'm working on it.