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Samson Reece

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I took a listen to Time, Obsessed and Myself. Hope you don't mind me giving you critique as I believe its the only way we all can get better. If your serious about this, I would invest in what you use to record your vocals and practice your rapping technique. In rapping your word play and flow are so important to keep your fans attention. If you have multiple ways of rapping or 'flow' then you can perform different styles to different beats but at the moment your current style is the same on all of your tracks. I'm sure with practice you will get there, keep it up!

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Pantonal

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I agree with Samson that the vocals could be improved both with regard to the quality of sound captured and the performance. Unlike Samson I'm not convinced you were rapping. The fact that I'm unsure what you were actually trying to do means that it wasn't done well. From a singers point of view, I would strongly suggest you learn more about rapping because any sense of pitch and vocal technique was not evident in these recordings. As for rapping I'm no expert but there doesn't seem to be much emotional expression in these recordings.

 

Your profile says you're only here for self promotion. I believe that's a mistake. There is much you could learn here. Good luck.

 

Steve

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Victor Palacios

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On 6/1/2021 at 5:06 PM, Mdumsen Mbanjwa said:

The debut EP by 3minetkid talks about him being himself and the things that is happening in his life.

 

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Listen Here: https://untd.io/m/myself-ep

 

Thanks In Advance

Hi there,

 

This being a lyrics critique forum, could you please specify what kind of feedback you're expecting?

 

Cheers, 

 

Víctor

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