Lilly Is A Ballernia

[x_*kate*_x]

Lilly Is A Ballerina

Lilly is a ballerina

when she dances she smiles

and she feels alive

and throws her hands up high

living her dreams

but slowly running out of time

as she spins in circles

you can see the fears, the tears

as lilly falls and hits the ground

up in heaven

shes twirling 'round and 'round

Edited July 9, 2006 by x_*kate*_x

[Rudi]

Lilly Is A Ballerina

Lilly is a ballerina

when she dances she smiles

and she feels alive

and throws her hands up high

living her dreams

but slowly running out of time

as she spins in circles

you can see the fears the tears

as lilly falls and hits the ground

up in heaven

shes spinning 'round and 'round

you can see the fears, the tears

Yes, I am sad enough to put a comma in.

Its what I would call Wistful. Its quite pretty too.

If it were mine, I would substitute 'twirling' for 'spinning', it sounds more dancelike.

I just re-read it. Its growing on me. Lovely.

[Mudknot]

I would go with twirling, too. Good stuff here. Keep it up!

[merciful evans]

made me think of lily petals floating to the ground.

was that on purpose, or did i bring it with me?

either way, its tidy!