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merciful evans

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  1. 2 trains - little feat whats this song anyway zarin? never heard of it.
  2. zippity do dah : Lyrics by Ray Gilbert and Allie Wrubel
  3. an i say to myself, what a wunderful woild
  4. my boomerang wont come back : charlie drake
  5. i close my eyes and count to ten - by dusty springfield
  6. merciful evans

    First Entry.

    Dave Gimore? not Gilmore then? Tell us more
  7. rough deal, good story. thanks donna. where did you get that contract smiley!
  8. structure or song form (verse, chorus, verse, chorus, mid-8, chorus chorus etc.) 8 rhyme schemes (ABAB etc) 4 alliteration (She Sells Sea Shells) 5 imagery (Oh the mountains and the sky oh... ) 7 rhymes (same rhymes crop up across various lyrics) 4 emotions (What, another sad song?) 8 themes/story line (da bitch gone done it again) 7 message (what you are actually saying with the lyric) 9 type of hook (poignant, flippant etc) 5
  9. without jl’s poetic licence, you have to change the rhyme: …it isn’t hard to do… …and no religion too. …and no religion either. what will rhyme with this? … no european beaver? no microcantilever? no malarial fever? no sigourney weaver? no nothing neither? no vauxhall viva? no labrador retriever? john lennon was a mercurial writer. i think he should be forgiven.
  10. roll out the barrel (the beer barrel polka) - trad
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