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Hi friends

Just trying to test the water here. Here's a verse which I think can be classified as a poem. I'm trying to develop it into a lyric and post the full one on that forum if I manage to do it. Any suggestions would be most welcome.

Jan

When the southern breeze

Strokes my skin

Mild and mellow

In early June

Withered memories

Blossom within

Like meadows

In full bloom.

© 2008 Jan Johansen

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