Brayoski

I am soon hitting studio to record some tracks i composed. Its my first time . I did a trial and what i got sounded soft and 'whispery' and kynda raw(though it wasnt edited much) . What can i do to reduce ths? any effects suggestions?

Some nights i stay up,cashing in my bad luck.| some nights i call it a draw by fun (some nights) but there are several other lines that i feel were plucked off my mind,n i wish id written them first.

Definately could love to take part in the contests where i can.