RikGrimesIsDead

its a all round nice piece bro! few changes here and there and you may have a nice track.what sound of beat goes with this?was you going accapella?

My effort at freestyle SEE HIM,SLAY HIM AND EVERYONE WHO’S WITH HIM PUSSY HAD IT COMING AND HIS 0* RATING WIGGA TRIED TO RUSH ON ME BECAUSE HIS BITCH SHE FLASHED HER BUSH AT ME I REALLY WISH I DIDNT SEE THAT SKANKY HO IN FRONT OF ME SLAP SLAP SLAP TO THE SIDE OF HER CHEEK SHE’S DOWN CRACK CRACK CRACK IS THE SOUND OF YOUR KNEES YOU DOWN I TOLD YOU NOT TO COME AT THIS THE NIGHT THAT YOU WAS SAYING SHIT SEE YOU THINK YOUR A BLOOD OR CRIP SUFFER TILL I EMPTY CLIP I SAID WHEN I FIND IMA KEEP YOU GUESSING WEATHER YOU DIE WITH A MAC OR MY SMITH N WESTERN BUT YOUR TIME HAS COME IM GONNA VIDEO RECORD IT AND SEND TO MUM THAT HER SON IS A PUSSY AND HE HAD IT COMING AND WHEN YOUR ONLINE DONT GO RUNNING… YOUR MOUTH CAUSE ILL MAKE YOU GO SOUTH IN THE DIRT INTERRUPT THE FUNERAL WATCH YOUR FAMILY HURT MAKE YOUR MOMMA CRY KICK THE SOIL IN HER EYE

my man

where are you in this mic game all you bitches rap the same IT'S THE TRUTH and you know my rhymes are deep you wanna put on your pad and keep IT'S THE TRUTH now i dont mean to offend im just sayin when you hear my name on your knees start prayin come up against me and i make your rhymes sound cute bitch dont square up when you dont have the attributes to do something about it acting like a gangster when your so f*cking far from it IT'S THE TRUTH when you go too far out comes the mac 11 bullets sprayin in all your bitches backs oh sorry you aint done 2 in the kneecaps so you cant get up and run stand over your body blaze on the cheese stand over your body watch a bitch bleed IT'S THE TRUTH (X3)....... Yo where's Charlie? This is my FIRE IN THE BOOTH

MY SUPERHERO (CHORUS) As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair And always know the danger,never makes a sound But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground MY SUPERHERO (x3) (v1) In your spare time baby you are a thing of beauty ready to be the saviour To all the men,women and babies And you really dont see All the good things you do But my idol thats just you No regard for your own safety As long as we are rescued safely MY SUPERHERO (x2) (CHORUS) As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair And always know the danger,never makes a sound But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground MY SUPERHERO (x3) (v2) Baby my heart almost skipped a beat When you revealed your surprise Fighting bad guys through you're disguise But it made me love you more and more And it’s what we are all fighting for You risk your life every day So to you i wanna say….you’re MY SUPERHERO (x3) (CHORUS) As you swoop down in your cape and long blonde hair Make being a superhero look easy with your style and your flair And always know the danger,never makes a sound But has enough power to put you 6ft in the ground MY SUPERHERO (x3) (V3) And as you swoop down…….MY SUPERHERO I feel safe…..MY SUPERHERO Saves the day ……MY SUPERHERO Here to stay……MY SUPERHERO My superhero (x2) Saved my life My superhero (x2) saved my life MY SUPER——HERO written by David Smith copyright (r) 2017

is this a sentence? a poem? certainly not a song....... work work work

cheerrs!!!!!!!AHHH THANKS!!

AHHH THANKS!!

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I’M FALLING (CHORUS) Cause baby…..I'm falling…..I'm falling down so hard Baby I’m calling For help to fight this fight and hold me through the night And never leave meeeeee Cause baby I’m falling. Against the cage as blows rain down upon me Blood on my face black and blue from the beating I can’t feel the pain anymore Its just the way I’m feeling (CHORUS) I have a battle with life … oh baby its winning Since the day you left my heads a mess and I’m quitting I don’t want to see the light of day cause i really don’t deserve it It will only be filled with pain Cause baby you aint in it I see this gun and think to myself…pull the triggerrrrr Don't understand why people still point the fingerrrrr Cause they don’t know me and they don’t know us The things we went through The way i love you (CHORUS) Tired of feeling alone, empty and broken Eyes feeling heavy as i inhale the smoke in Can’t rid this feeling of hurt and despair Especially with the words I’m hearing Cause i know its the haze putting my head in a daze Makes me hurting… (CHORUS) I’m falling (x5) Help me fight this fight I’m calling (x5) Hold me through the night Hold me through the night…. cause baby I’m falling

my effort of a rap/hip-hop track......rate and feedback welcome guys Snowflakes hitting my face Icy winds fallen grace Jingle bells,everyone happy Rest my head near a dirty nappy Used needles,empty bags of coke No jingle bells this year My life’s a joke See i messed up,one mistake that one mistake brought all the hate to my door,piling up to the third floor no questions just hate no sympathy just people looking irate see you don’t know this is my life it aint a show Now don’t get me wrong i aint saying its fine i am no angel but lets draw the line when I’m getting abuse in the street its not fair and we need to meet to sort shit cause I’m not taking it time to stand up and make shit greater get away from the little boy hater Im better than you i aint lying you know its true your a joker,pathetic no hoper and ill take you to school on this mic ill say some shit you will not like but its coming…. words that will make you go running cause your a fake low life liar,a dirty snake Im angry you think shit and dont even say shit go run and text shit hide behind your self shit and now im done with it and this aint me you did it being a sneak lying to my face week after week ill be the one laughing when im sorted and happy and youll be lonely and feeling crappy caused you f*cked it all up and when i see you in the street there wont be a... what’s up and i wont even care for all i know its a stranger there you f*cked this now don’t go running your mouth to chris cause he tells me every little f*cking thing you got to say about me so just go just go anywhere i dont know but just be gone or there will be a spot in the cemetary room for one WRITTEN BY DAVID SMITH