Leo

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  1. Hey mate, despite my bad joke on my above post, it is still relevant if you are interested. G'day
  2. Hey Ken, I think your song sounds cool. I can suggest to bring the guitar more front stage. And ease a little of the affects. And also I would go for more natural singing. Best of luck
  3. It is a bit messy. But imagine if you were higher it would have hit you straight in the head.... joking. Thanks.
  4. Hey folks, Here's a new single called 'Wing It' by 'Leo and the Dude' https://m.soundcloud.com/leosherman/wing-it
  5. Thats a great idea John. I love slide guitars.I'll add that on, Thanks.
  6. A new Blues song by 'Leo and the Dude' would love to get some opinions on the lyrics, thanks. THE LAST BLUES There is no use in saying, All the things that I think, You cannot change some people, They hold strong at the seam, Little dance of opinions, Oh the tricks of our minds, Make you feel like your wining, When you close up your mind, Hold on, the circle turns, Hold on, Oh I cannot remember, When I first had the taste, Of betraying my brother, With a knife in his back, But we both have been killers, For the whole of our life's, Oh a blindfolded creature, Who believes it is not, Hold on, the search is done, Hold on, So the faith our children, Will be left up to god, We imagined our maker, To answer our pride, While the time we invented, Takes over our life, I go back to a feeling, What is basically right, Hold on, the circle turns, Hold on, Hold on, the circle turns, Hold on,
  7. Hey folks, Here's the lyrics to one of our future projects, would love to hear your thoughts. American Band Before you enter, I've got to say, I've known one's like you, that end in pain, And I have always, tried to stay away, You've got me singing, some american band, It's a new emotion, that you just can't shake, Can't run and hide, behind yourself, Wait I'm not over, my last mistake, And i'm not open, to fall like this, It get's so noisy, inside my head, You've got me singing some american band, It's a new emotion, that you just can't shake, Can't run and hide, behind yourself, It's a new emotion, that you just can't shake, Can't run and hide, behind yourself,
  8. Hey there, Here is a 1+1 demo for the above lyrics. I would appreciate any comments. Thanks https://soundcloud.com/leosherman/brand-new/s-7XIAn
  9. Lyrics written, just now, to a melody I'm working on for the past couple of days. Thanks for listening, thanks for commenting, Brand new What ever I find, I try to forget, To wake every day, Brand new, Keeping this way, I could leap through my days, Not taking the past, With me, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, And time went on by, But I stayed the same, I tried to change you, You wouldn't, You kept it all, No matter how small, Rolled it up in a ball, To play with, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, So I take my turn, Trying to learn, To take but a piece, With me, To wake every day, and try to let go, Of worries or foe, Beat them, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new,
  10. Fixed, Thanks
  11. Poetic V We used to play out in the fields, And fight with branches like they're steel, Well I was seven you were ten, How life was limitless back then, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end, never end, never end, V And we moved forward with the years, And we'll just meet to have a beer, But I feel seven you are ten, And life was limitless back then, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end, never end, never end, C PART It was early this morning, when I picked up the phone, Now everything is burning, And I feel so alone, And all that is happy, You take to the grave, And the fields will stay empty, For somebody else, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end Never end,
  12. Hey Sreyashi, Thanks for your comments, Those certainly are good questions. I need to have a thinker on that one, 1. your'e definitely right. 2.Yep that sounds better. 3.I like it as well. I feel I went the 'wrong way about' with those lines. Thank you very much. There's a demo coming.
  13. Hey Alex, I think your song is pretty good. It's not really my kind of musical style, but I'm hooked. You got a very nice singing voice, and I like the overall structure and story of the song. While I can't really offer much advice about arrangement (except that I would keep it light, drum and base), I have a few small remarks regarding the lyrics. I would suggest replacing the word 'love' with 'be'. I think it's wrong to say it that way. The scene you describe of 'being with out him' feels unrelated to me. I just don't understand what's going on. I would suggest telling about regular day to day life, but it's not the same 'with out him'. I would drop the soon, the line feels to packed to me. I really enjoyed your song, Good luck,
  14. Hey folks, Our dated internet radio interview with a radio legend. https://www.sparemin.com/myrecording/2681/_branch_match_id=367472620246596598 Thanks
  15. Thanks Rudi, I think they had a lyrics once. But, if you choose an individual song you will get the lyrics for it. Sorry for the inconvenience.
  16. 'Be Right Back' was recorded over four long nights in a Tel-aviv basement. A lone classic guitar and vocals to songs written over the previous 7 years. It was then mixed and produced by Ido yaron. The album has a unique sound originating from the minimalist nature of the recordings. It draws inspiration from Blues, Folk, Rock and Popular music. The lyrics in the album deal with love, hope and human suffer. for your listening enjoyment, https://leoandthedude.bandcamp.com/album/be-right-back
  17. A project ive done as a lyricist. What do you think? Reach out I don't need nobody to hold my hand, I just need somebody to understand, Are you standing on my side, reach out, It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find, I've been doing plenty but my own way, And I know that someday I'll get my pay, Can you open up your mind, reach out, It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find, I've got mixed emotions about this race, So for now I'm waiting for my last place, Can you slow down to my time, Reach out It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find,
  18. Say It All To Me V I am lonely, when we argue, There's my side and, there is yours, Keep on talking, I can hear you, Don't go silent, on this telephone, C Raise our voices, world's colliding, State your anger, loud and clear, Rid yourself of, All this poison, But keep on talking, say it all to me, V Those stupid waves of , absent minded, We build our forts to, prove our strength, We spend hours, in those tranches, Please keep talking, so I know youre there, C Raise our voices, world's colliding, State your anger, loud an clear, Rid yourself of, All this poison, But keep on talking, say it all to me,
  19. Hey Blitz, Do you write/play/record music? Not that you have to. Welcome
  20. I think in art there shouldn't be any rules. Also in life, but that is a different matter. Sure, some might find the change in lyrics or structure annoying. But others will appreciate the continues growth. In other words, you can't please everybody, unless you get them all drunk. I say, play the song the way you feel it should play.
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  22. Hey scotsman, Thanks for your comment, it's a good point. Do you think it might work if the line will go "I feel lonley" instead of being? Getting a little intimate. I feel lonley when I have a big fight with my partner and were not talking. Evenn though technically im not alone. Thanks again
  23. Thanks for your comments Arty, I think I understand your remark on 'limitless'. I must admit instinctively i likr the way limitless rolls of my tongue. It might be a getting too used to domething sort of thing. So, I will try and play the song with "life had not limits back then" for a bit and see if I can make it work for me. Thanks a bounch for your critique. I will fix the link, thanks.
  24. Hey Jenn, Youve got a nice singing voice. I can only offer the following amature advice: 1. Relax your shoulders. 2. Be aware of breading in between phrases. 3. Don't drink and record. 4. I'm sure there is better advice online. Happy hangover
  25. Hey Gecko, Sounds interesting. Cant wait to hear your music mate.