Leo

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  1. Hey there, Here is a 1+1 demo for the above lyrics. I would appreciate any comments. Thanks https://soundcloud.com/leosherman/brand-new/s-7XIAn
  2. Lyrics written, just now, to a melody I'm working on for the past couple of days. Thanks for listening, thanks for commenting, Brand new What ever I find, I try to forget, To wake every day, Brand new, Keeping this way, I could leap through my days, Not taking the past, With me, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, And time went on by, But I stayed the same, I tried to change you, You wouldn't, You kept it all, No matter how small, Rolled it up in a ball, To play with, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new, So I take my turn, Trying to learn, To take but a piece, With me, To wake every day, and try to let go, Of worries or foe, Beat them, I used to pretend, To not miss the blues, That's why I have failed, Again and again, and here in the end, all I will say, I hope we will meet, Brand new,
  3. Poetic V We used to play out in the fields, And fight with branches like they're steel, Well I was seven you were ten, How life was limitless back then, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end, never end, never end, V And we moved forward with the years, And we'll just meet to have a beer, But I feel seven you are ten, And life was limitless back then, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end, never end, never end, C PART It was early this morning, when I picked up the phone, Now everything is burning, And I feel so alone, And all that is happy, You take to the grave, And the fields will stay empty, For somebody else, C Back then, Speaking words no one else could understand, Tell each other that this will never end Never end,
  4. Hey Sreyashi, Thanks for your comments, Those certainly are good questions. I need to have a thinker on that one, 1. your'e definitely right. 2.Yep that sounds better. 3.I like it as well. I feel I went the 'wrong way about' with those lines. Thank you very much. There's a demo coming.
  5. Hey Alex, I think your song is pretty good. It's not really my kind of musical style, but I'm hooked. You got a very nice singing voice, and I like the overall structure and story of the song. While I can't really offer much advice about arrangement (except that I would keep it light, drum and base), I have a few small remarks regarding the lyrics. I would suggest replacing the word 'love' with 'be'. I think it's wrong to say it that way. The scene you describe of 'being with out him' feels unrelated to me. I just don't understand what's going on. I would suggest telling about regular day to day life, but it's not the same 'with out him'. I would drop the soon, the line feels to packed to me. I really enjoyed your song, Good luck,
  6. Hey folks, Our dated internet radio interview with a radio legend. https://www.sparemin.com/myrecording/2681/_branch_match_id=367472620246596598 Thanks
  7. Thanks Rudi, I think they had a lyrics once. But, if you choose an individual song you will get the lyrics for it. Sorry for the inconvenience.
  8. 'Be Right Back' was recorded over four long nights in a Tel-aviv basement. A lone classic guitar and vocals to songs written over the previous 7 years. It was then mixed and produced by Ido yaron. The album has a unique sound originating from the minimalist nature of the recordings. It draws inspiration from Blues, Folk, Rock and Popular music. The lyrics in the album deal with love, hope and human suffer. for your listening enjoyment, https://leoandthedude.bandcamp.com/album/be-right-back
  9. A project ive done as a lyricist. What do you think? Reach out I don't need nobody to hold my hand, I just need somebody to understand, Are you standing on my side, reach out, It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find, I've been doing plenty but my own way, And I know that someday I'll get my pay, Can you open up your mind, reach out, It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find, I've got mixed emotions about this race, So for now I'm waiting for my last place, Can you slow down to my time, Reach out It's the little things that I, seek but, Can't find,
  10. Say It All To Me V I am lonely, when we argue, There's my side and, there is yours, Keep on talking, I can hear you, Don't go silent, on this telephone, C Raise our voices, world's colliding, State your anger, loud and clear, Rid yourself of, All this poison, But keep on talking, say it all to me, V Those stupid waves of , absent minded, We build our forts to, prove our strength, We spend hours, in those tranches, Please keep talking, so I know youre there, C Raise our voices, world's colliding, State your anger, loud an clear, Rid yourself of, All this poison, But keep on talking, say it all to me,
  11. Hey Blitz, Do you write/play/record music? Not that you have to. Welcome
  12. I think in art there shouldn't be any rules. Also in life, but that is a different matter. Sure, some might find the change in lyrics or structure annoying. But others will appreciate the continues growth. In other words, you can't please everybody, unless you get them all drunk. I say, play the song the way you feel it should play.
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  14. Hey scotsman, Thanks for your comment, it's a good point. Do you think it might work if the line will go "I feel lonley" instead of being? Getting a little intimate. I feel lonley when I have a big fight with my partner and were not talking. Evenn though technically im not alone. Thanks again
  15. Thanks for your comments Arty, I think I understand your remark on 'limitless'. I must admit instinctively i likr the way limitless rolls of my tongue. It might be a getting too used to domething sort of thing. So, I will try and play the song with "life had not limits back then" for a bit and see if I can make it work for me. Thanks a bounch for your critique. I will fix the link, thanks.
  16. Hey Jenn, Youve got a nice singing voice. I can only offer the following amature advice: 1. Relax your shoulders. 2. Be aware of breading in between phrases. 3. Don't drink and record. 4. I'm sure there is better advice online. Happy hangover
  17. Hey Gecko, Sounds interesting. Cant wait to hear your music mate.
  18. I wouldn't mind writing lyrics for this... if you are interested. Send me link to download and Ill send you a draft for your thoghts.
  19. Hey rudi, Thank for your comments. It's not a typical sound for me, perhaps its the result of my cercomstences. My only available instruments are my guitar and vocals. So I use those to remember melodies when recording scratch demos. I write mainly bluesy folky stuff, trying to find a distenctive sound. And working on being aible to record more professionaly. And get closer to a full production. I am in the process of recording guitar and vox for a future album with a rythem section and arrengments. And writing new stuff all the time. Some, like this one, sounded interesting enough, to me, to put out as is. I agree it's got a weird vibe about it. With the vocals coming from all direction. To do that I recorded them seperatly with out hearing the other back vox tracks. So, I wouldn't try to replica one when doing another. There was no editing done on the piece, other then a few buildin fx in the 4track app i use (some delay, compression and reverb). I'm happy the song made an impression on you. Thanks for listening.
  20. Hey folks, Here's a new single called 'Wing It' by 'Leo and the Dude' https://m.soundcloud.com/leosherman/wing-it
  21. Hey Mat, Im not a pro. But I have been studying the matter lately and Im gonna add an AT2035(con) to my SM57(dyn). Both have very good value for money, and are considered an industry staple. As far as i managed to find out. Also, more information about what you are planing to record(vocals, guitar, drums, trumpet...) and how, will help you towards getting you a better answer.
  22. White Summer - Yardbirds
  23. Very cool track.