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Write a song about it..

Hey Sreyashi, I'm not a poet, but here is my 10 cents. It reads to me as if the first verse is a person looking retrospectively on his life. As he hit a turn sign. Then the second verse feels like old age, And the third like childhood, or being born. And the last verse is the safe feeling of knowing everything will be alright. Just because you remember all you managed to overcome through life. If that is the case... I would suggest to replace verse 3 and 2 order in the poem, for chronological reasons. And perhaps, a verse to describe adulthood? I enjoyed your poem very much, Thank you

Good on you! Best of luck!

That's awesome, dig your style man.

I will add a photo of the action and a sound bit when i get back to it in a couple of weeks.

Just bought a 1979 Fender F75 acoustic.

Hey, This has just become a song. Updated lyrics and a rough demo included. Love to hear your opinions, thanks. Pick and Lift Unseen tonight, There’s no light, Dark inside and out, A sound that might, Wake up a fright, In those who sleep so tight, Then unaware, Myself I scare, As I break the inside, A breath I take, Of stolen air, To fuel my long, lost pride, I pick and lift, And break a chunk, Of someone else's junk, To build a wall, Fulfil my roll, To band my leaking soul, Then unaware, Myself I scare, As I break the inside, A breath I take, Of stolen air, To fuel my long lost pride, Ain’t ashamed to say, For me no other way to be, It’s me behind,the mask I wear.

A new edition. All critique is welcomed. Pick and Lift Unseen tonight, There’s no light, Dark inside and out, A sound just might, Wake up a fright, In those who sleep so tight, Then unaware, Myself I scare, As I break the inside, A breath I take, Of stolen air, To fuel my long lost pride, I pick and lift, And break a chunk, Of someone else's life, To build a whole, Fulfil my roll, To band my leaking soul, Ashamed to claim, What I must bare, It’s me behind the mask I wear,

Thanks John, I agree, Iv'e changed that part. What do you think? Pick and Lift Unseen tonight, Where there’s no light, Dark inside and out, A sound that might, Wake up a fright, In those who sleep tight, Then unaware, Myself I scare, As I break the inside, A breath I take, Of stolen air, To fuel my long lost pride, I pick and lift, And break a piece, Of someone else's life, To build a whole, To fill a hole, To band my leaking heart, Ashamed to say, No easy way, It’s me behind the mask I wear,

Hey folks, First time post to poet's corner. What do you think? Pick and Lift Unseen tonight, There is no light, Dark inside and out, A sound that might, Wake up a fright, In those who sleep so tight, Unaware, Myself I scare, As I break the inside, A breath I take, Of stolen air, To fuel my long lost pride, I pick and lift, All that I can, Tonight I dine myself, amen, A king of kings, A self made man, A pirate on dry land, But unaware, I stop and stare, A photo of my wife?, Could It, It seems, It couldn’t be, I think I just had might, Ashamed to say, No easy way, I’m robbing my own house,

Hey Sreyashi, Good questions. 1. For me it's a melody that comes to mind or arises from playing random stuff on a guitar . 2. Lyrically I like Cat stevens, Joni Mitchell, Simon and Garfunkel, The Band, also Beck and the smith. Personally I would sing what feels right G'day

Hey Blitz, Do you write/play/record music? Not that you have to. Welcome

I think in art there shouldn't be any rules. Also in life, but that is a different matter. Sure, some might find the change in lyrics or structure annoying. But others will appreciate the continues growth. In other words, you can't please everybody, unless you get them all drunk. I say, play the song the way you feel it should play.

Hey Gecko, Sounds interesting. Cant wait to hear your music mate.

Hey Mat, Im not a pro. But I have been studying the matter lately and Im gonna add an AT2035(con) to my SM57(dyn). Both have very good value for money, and are considered an industry staple. As far as i managed to find out. Also, more information about what you are planing to record(vocals, guitar, drums, trumpet...) and how, will help you towards getting you a better answer.