justtryingtosing

Thanks, Will do!

Hi guys, So i just joined up, for mainly one reason; to get feedback on my lyrics...and whatnot. So i'm just going to post one song for now and hopefully get some feedback, yeah? Okay, here goes... Verse1: I'm just waiting waiting for the right time and im just contemplating thinking about my life maybe one day i will find my way ill be on the right road for this story untold it will unfold right infront of me verse2: where you going, baby? you've been acting shady lately been making things feel not so right been making me wait up for you all night long, and i understand that you, are doing what you can but sometimes its just not enough and things start feeling pretty tough hook: but you gotta keep going, yeah just keep it flowing and in the end you'll just make your way back to start Thats how it is, because life is hard chorus: just go with it, baby dont hold back from it just hold on till you cant no more find something thats worth living for yeah, dont be ashamed of it dont refrain from this this is exactly who you're gonna be its your life, you dont need to follow me, yeah verse: here we are again saying things we've already said im telling you "you need to leave this life behind" you're telling me you cant say goodbye just take a deep breath and realise theres better than this, yeah (chorus x2) bridge: you dont need me anymore dont need me anymore you can spread your wings and fly away im not gonna make you try and stay baby just fly away okay, so i know it's really random and probably doesnt sound very good (probably because i wrote it in about 5 minutes), and it isnt my usual style...but i thought i might try something different to see how people like this before i go straight into my style. Thoughts?