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Dawn Robertson

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  1. Cut Her Some Slack

    By Dawn Robertson

    May/2017

     

    From a beautiful land 

    Way before time

    A vision was had

    That a woman was right

     

    For eternity following 

    Men would truly try

    To tear down that woman

    And make her cry

     

    Men always thinking

    A woman's easier to control

    Without self confidence 

    Without friends or her goals

     

    But the contrary realism

    Is far distant from that

    They just want their man

    To love them back

     

    Woman sacrifice and go without

    And not say a word

    They keep things inside

    And bury their hurt

     

    Until one day she just lets it out

    Often years in the making 

    She purges the pain

    Often crying and shaking

     

    Then she is good again

    And just carries on

    Creating a better life for others

    With her wings on

     

    So the next time you feel

    That your woman is crazy

    You must think again

    She is far from lazy

     

    Just take five minutes

    And cut her some slack

    Let her know you see her struggles

    And that you have her back

     

    You will become even closer

    And she will love you even more

    There's nothing better to have

    Then a woman you adore

     

    She will glow like the heavens

    And make you feel complete

    Because she is born to love

    And you are born to receive

  2. Welcome to the forums Dawn Robertson :)

    1. Dawn Robertson

      Thank you for having me. I do love a challenge and the latest no rhyming lyric challenge was difficult but rewarding as it forced me to go out of my comfort zone. I enjoyed it immensely. Have a great day fellow writers!

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