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    Byrds, Gram Parsons, JJ Cale, Willie Deville

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  1. Thank you very much for your comments Marty. Yes that is me singing. I like the Smithereens' comment, hadn't thought of it before, but I agree, they had a great edgy/pop sound. You've inspired me to post some of my other songs (Cookies and No Expectations) which have more of a JJ Cale/Derek & Dominoes feel. Would appreciate your feedback on those as well. Best to you Jim. I'll have to try to post these songs later, as the files are too big for this platform. thanks again. Since I couldn't post the aforementioned songs, I posted two others instead They are at the same Revebnation site as in original post. I'm So Blue and Little Bird. No, these ones are not like JJ Cale/Derek. But I'm So Blue does have the B3.
  2. I very much like the song melody (have no idea what the lyrics mean) , and the vocals are really nice, I don't like the electric guitar. I think the song would benefit with just acoustic instruments (maybe replace the guitar part with mandolin or a rhythm violin part) With a tighter arrangement, this could be really, really good. Best to you, Jim
  3. Posting some songs from my first CD. Looking for a bigger audience and feedback. The first song, the Change, draws on the influences of the Byrds/Beatles The second song, My Grievous Heartache draws on the influence of Hank Williams, Merle Haggard and Gram Parsons The third song, Can't Figure This Out is my attempt at blues a la ZZ Top I've got lots more songs. checkout Jim Camaren at Reverbnation or at Facebook. Would very much appreciate feedback Posted a new song: "The Change"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/156145958 Posted a new song: "My Grievous Heartache"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/156266025 Posted a new song: "Can't Figure This Out"http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/157226184
  4. Welcome to the forums Bagelboy :)

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