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Thanks again man Its genre is Electronic Dance Music. So I think as you said it's a little bit too old for that. I have to change it Just could u plz tell me which one makes it old? "much more to be done" or "a chance at love"

Yes I mean English somebody told me to write: "much more to do" instead of "much more to be done" and a "chance to love instead of "a chance at love" So I decided to ask it here Thank you

Hi everybody Could you tell me whether there are mistakes with these lines or not? 1.there is much to say and much more to be done 2. we have a chance at love...a moment to break some rules