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  1. So since I'm already here, I'm going post some lyrics. I'm not that confident about my lyrics, but I'm posting it anyway. Now this one, I'm not sure about the title and the last chorus, and I feel the choruses are too short. Anyway, feedback please! The copyright at the bottom probably not necessary (who will steal this anyway) but just to be safe.

    Burning Potions with the Moonlight (Hocus Pocus)

    Underneath the wicked full-blown moon
    Got a set of spells I wanna try out
    Prey all you want, morn'll never come soon
    Drown in your own moans and shouts

    Love potion, seduction, it's all in the motion
    Dash of sugar and splash of wine
    Friction, tension, wind blowing away the caution
    I'll do anything to get back what should be mine

    (Bridge)
    Hocus pocus, don't lose focus
    Now repeat what I want you to say

    (Chorus)
    And even the wrong words seem to rhyme
    Parsley sage rosemary and thyme
    Faking promises that I'll be fine
    Try all I can he'll never be mine (whoo!)

    Underneath my wide, full blown smile
    Lies a wicked dark little smirk
    Being in the sheep's clothing has its perks
    I think I'll just stay by your side, for a little while

    Higher, higher, ignite the fire
    Enchant me, entrance me, get me hypnotised
    Don't tire, every push a bit more stronger
    She doesn't deserve you, it's bout time you realised

    (Bridge)
    Hocus pocus, you need not focus
    She and I are gonna just have a small talk

    (chorus)
    And even the wrong words seem to rhyme
    Parsley sage rosemary and thyme
    One step and you'll out of line
    And all alone making these words rhyme

    And I'd mutter some nonsense
    To keep you on your toes
    Burn a whole lot of incense
    And fry a few bones
    Cause you're on your way to being petrified
    And it's fun to watch you terrified

    (chorus)
    And even the wrong words seem to rhyme
    Parsley sage rosemary and thyme
    I've strung you up in a line
    And he watches and he just feels fine


    © 2013 Jiwon Heo All rights reserved
    Hi, everyone.


    I just made an account today, and I'm going to use this blog to post all my lyrics.

    I write lyrics in my spare time, and since I'm not doing anything with it, I thought I could give it to someone who can actually make music out of it.

    If you see something you like, just contact me. You need my confirmation to use it, but I don't mind if you make some changes to it. I don't require money, but I want to hear the finished product and be credited for the lyrics.

    My lyrics' style varies (greatly) according to my mood (like my music taste) so I'm sure there's something for everyone. I'm not that confident about my lyrics, but I'm posting it anyway. Some feedback will be nice (don't worry about being too harsh, but I need constructive criticism, so don't just throw insults at me. Or you can just throw praises at me, which will do wonders to my ego).
    I have a lot of stuff, and I'll keep posting.

    My email address: holdon2thislullaby@gmail.com

    Thank you,
    Jessie.
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