LyricallyGifted

Thanks man apreciate it ! if you wanna har some vocals check me out at http://www.smule.com/BeenRadical

Thanks homie , check my stuff out ! I think yull like it !

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Not a saint , a sinner Im drinkig paint thiner its clear that I aint a winner Im loosin myself Abusin my health So my life be choosin itself Stupid ive felt From birth to present day And its at its worse presentlaay Cuz my curse is sendin mee Death bound Im walkin through busy intersectioms woth my head down God why wont you take me for christ sakes I said now Maybe I wont go cuz I was destined to be the best ? Doubtful Cuz noone understands me like i was talkin with my mouthful When I was born momma said lets keep it Daddy said what is this Twenty years later im developing mental sickness To spit shit Rawr and uncanny Not fancy , dirty f*ck whatchya heard ! Ya heard me ? I move quick and shoot tips at kids with loose lips So yu talking to ? Who you walking to ? I lick shots when im standin right on top of yu So yo im out , with no doubt I kiss mine and yo mother with this dirty f*ckin mouth -SKINnBONES CHECK OUT MY SHIT ON AUTORAP User = BeenRadical

I like it guy ! Seen alot of improvement in your rhymes ! Very creative Keep it up

I like it guy ! Seen alot of improvement in your rhymes ! Very creative Keep it up

Our Deepest Fear Is Not That We are inadequate Our Deepest Fear Is That We are Powerful Beyond Measure It is Our Light, Not our darkness that most frightens us. Either i express myself or i live dead sentence to 25 to life in this Muuhafkin head is it something that i said or something that i did ? cuz i cant seem to wake from this nightmare scared to fight fair cuz they might stair even though my problems are exactly like theirs But They don't wanna hear it but this page i wont clear it Success i must be near it Beacause i know i merit someone to listen cuz the shit that i'm spittin is iller than a mental condition and realer than anything anyone has ever written so when you see me , don't bother saying hi cuz i'm too busy waving at my life as it passes me by Dont know what failing is , cuz i dont got the balls to try maybe ill get one word in by the time that i die. Could really use a few suggestion on content and structure thank you LyricallyGifted.

You don't wanna see me on your TV let alone be me Cuz im as wack as Eminem's last CD Told her eat me Cuz last time we f*cked it was pure extortion blown way outta proportion had to use a coat hanger to give you an abortion you can find me in the back of the club in the alley ,shooting up or snorting im talking illusion and distortion till the police be reporting he's dangerous ! He's Radical ! call the squad and tell em be tactical We want him dead, not alive i was too high to give five so i gave one f*ck You son

Thanks man

Im very iimpressed with both your verses i see alot of potential , still need to toghten up several line but al in all keep the omin !

Thanks man ! ill definetly work on it hey this is the beat I wrote it to if youd like to take a look. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jrtAiZ9Mk4

Thanks man , yeah im working on it , but the beat i am using is pretty choppy though

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IykuFXaK9zs Fist Verse to My first Single Hope you guys can really help me out with this one ! Dreams (0:23) can i kick it? can i bump to the rythm spittin something a little different ? do i need premission to , kick it to the children who are driftin through thinking they should be gifted too and lift them to , a new plautou just to let them know that even tho the worlds looking kinda rough sometimes the stars are looking up at us and as the wolrd turns , so do we so dont be , so quick to judge, and on your journey for your dreams dont forget to love. cause she has hers and he has his all meant to shine like little f*ckin kids (0:51) But we keep trading in , our dreams for wages and bids and im getting f*ckin pissed Cuz We need to stay true to the dreams of our youth cuz when tomorrow come you will still be you So Try to keep dreaming without hitting snooze So lemme hear you sing it , Cuz i know youve got the tools ! (1:08) LyricallyGifted AKA Unknown

Thanks man , Will Do !

I've made it through by payin dues & staying true aint sayin you should do the same cuz i haven't brought any fame to my name but that's all about the change cuz ill never let it go not to the day of my funeral so listen to my spirit and follow my soul cuz everything above me is now under my control and to myself i owe ------------------------------------ One more time more lines more rhymes (4x) -------------------------------------- Call me a wannabe cuz i wanna be the greatest MC put an I in between this is what i hold in my H-A-N-D And i grip it closely cuz its whats gunna take me away from the system trynna shape me and i appreciate it greatly cuz this world that im living in lately just aint me and the record button seems to instantly save me cuz the words always gave me --------------------------------------------- One more time More lines more rhymes (4x) ---------------------------------------------

Rough draft , gonna record this one, let me know what yall think. Yo as the times are changing, so are we so where do you wanna go who do yu wanna be ? a f*ckkk it can yuuu, Take me away , can you take me away ? cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say can you take me away ? from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today? so can yu take me away ? Go out get a job get paid , collect minimum wage, is what they say but i refuse to let the music fade cuz i was made for this trade so i get in the booth let loose, tell the truth and i shoot and i spray till it takes me away from the worries of tomorrow and im stress of today so believe me when i say that i will not slave a nine to five no way ill be working today so that tomorrow i can grind ! so im young and im fresh so expect nothing less than my abolute best when i rep and i rep nothing more nothing less than myself and my crew this is what i was born to be so this is what ill do but the preassures of society got me felling measured by anxiety so admire me as i say fk you and my boss fires me Take me away , can you take me away ? cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say can you take me away ? from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today? so can yu take me away ? Movin on to bigger and better things let the letter ring hopeffully the chedar brings not just wealth but help to me and everybody else but the fact is that world dont work like that wish it would bring us back to the days of barter and trade cuz the currency's urgency is hurtin me its gettin harder to pay and its getting even harder to stay so if its in a coffin or a cop car just bring me far from today so its 1-2 1-2 for all you slaves let me bring you as it takes me away Take me away , can you take me away ? cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say can you take me away ? from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today? so can yu take me away ? I might not survive but its okay even if i die cuz weather im dead or im alive my words will remain in every track fortified bustin' 8-9 rhymes every four to five lines and thats enough for me to sleep easily when i close my eyes and when im forced to rise i can keep em wide Bounc of the tide and ride rhythms on infinite not to say i did it cuz i need the music ill admit it kid i tried to get rid of it but then between me and you there was no difference so in this intance it, all starts here concious clear kids block yo ears to hear no evil time to show these people i can bust a flow but im lossin faith in the human race so i pick up the pace to let you know that im ready to go Take me away , can you take me away ? cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say can you take me away ? from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today? so can yu take me away ?

Intro - - this one goes out to all the women that ive mistreated Verse- i apologize to those of wich i shared laughs and woahs invited them to walk on the same road kept them close, just to cut them off cold like the batender had been told aint life soppoused to be gold how come those beats grow rapidly old rush poker , quick fold hit a bold , cliff leave them hearing sad riffs Clutch than shift and then thats it cause selfishly i didnt think youd fit but only later does it hit shit , i fked up big , time i only thought about mine and i hate those of that kind i cant go , and rewind buti cant dismiss it , like Nevermind cuz it felt right at the time But as it grew , i thought of those that left me behind and it kept me blind, so my heart tells me to apologize and define with deep sincerity , of why i barely , treated you fairly CUZ ! [Chorus] as we search for love and its valuable touch sometimes others get crushed and we dont think of it as much but it happens to every single one of us. every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every single one of us , every single one of us , every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every single one of us , every single one of us , Verse - i never forget , but i feel this sence of regret cuz you didnt get , a fair explanation but yet you kept , calm and let, me do me , instantly , set me free still thinkking how i wanned you to kiss me but what about the hesitation , i thought i did this carefully but the destination , wasnt gonna lead to harmony but your still a part of me, so pardon me , i didnt want this to be , a catastrophe Im sorry , Aly i treated you badly , so you have the right to be made at me but here's where i explain why , i really did like you and i really did try but were just two different slices, from two different pies and before i had a chance to speak , another woman caught my eye and that is where my true feelings lie , today ,tomorrow and until they die, so i hold back my tears i will not cry cuz i like to think your a strong girl , and you will get by [Chorus] as we search for love and its valuable touch sometimes others get crushed and we dont think of it as much but it happens to every single one of us. every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every single one of us , every single one of us , every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every single one of us , every single one of us ,

Still unfinished but edited please let me know what you think ! Dan - Into - Verse 1- Verse 3 - verse - 5 Brad - Verse 2 - Verse 4 - Verse 6

Thanks man !

here we go , here she flows, downstream she goes,leaving foes shocken from head to toe, everybody knows she's rough around the endges but her intentions ain't directly negative but our perception lets us be decieved by the black and not the green we just trying to achieve greatness beyond relief , flip and turn over a new leaf heading out to never retreat , religions bullshit but it's a belief and this is what believe since birth, we've all been cursed to prepare for the worst , so when we disapprove , try to get in our groove they try to move , us away fro the act , that tries to impact , the progression agaisnt the governments obsession of money and opression

I am Here and you are there , we make judgements that depend on where , the trends that we wear then you defend to pretend like you compare, instead why don't we connect and share, to affect the impaired no communism but try and be fair , but people turn away to the sight of flair , I cant bare to compromise with those who tare and reject someone who may be needy its f*cked up and greedy, im not gifted but i feel lifted when I help and arm thats being twisted and it aint cost me a dime ,cuz we were all meant to shine , like children do, so this time, enough is enough , everyone's gotta be so f*ckin tough , try helping someone outta the rough, but nah that's INSANE cuz the gain aint ever enough. - one who has lost faith

Diss me I diss back , I piss stacks , and tax the mutherfker that tries to impact my raps talking crap. Grab my pen and go full attack , step back with yur rymes that are wack. Infact they're garbage , rip you open and leave yu starving , for revenge wot the need to avange the fallen soldier cuz after yu im goin for all the others so go back home and hide under the covers , be a come back and hover kill yu n fk yur lover so peace before I release the noise of my toys ak 47 , its the big bad boys !

BOOM BOOM BOOOOM BOOM BOOM BOOOOM HERE COMES BIG BIG BRAD He's so bad he'll eta the last food you had but dont get mad , cuz i feed off rage , like my pen feinds for the page living in this day and age , to get to the club, gotta slap 10 teens in face i jus walk up with that ak , and spray like it's fkin d-day better pray i dont bleed , or that i black out , and i dont see cuz adrenaline spreads like desease , starts at the feet and moves to the knees next thing i know i killed three , human beings , ima beast and just been unleashed from the preasure of the police , and gunnning for my victim , so i can hit him grap my knife rip him , just to warm up for the rythm , so i must kill him i commit crimes , flip dimes, cut ties and tell lies cuz i despise the human race (WHYYY?) cuz we live a concious , tries to hold back from our so call nonsense but i gotta sixth sense thats ready to dispense anger in every direction and spread the intense infection of doom and doubt so foget the mess you once knew about , pick up and gun and figure something out , cuz the world as come to its end , its already over , so me and my glock stay best freinds BIG BAD BRAD