[Quick Verse For Rap Compitition. Bb(Our Deepest Fear)]

Thanks man 

apreciate it !

if you wanna har some vocals check me out at http://www.smule.com/BeenRadical

[Twisted & Tangled]

Thanks homie , check my stuff out ! I think yull like it !

[Twisted & Tangled]

http://www.smule.com/BeenRadical

[Twisted & Tangled]

Not a saint , a sinner

Im drinkig paint thiner

its clear that I aint a winner

Im loosin myself

Abusin my health

So my life be choosin itself

Stupid ive felt

From birth to present day

And its at its worse presentlaay

Cuz my curse is sendin mee

Death bound

Im walkin through busy intersectioms woth my head down

God why wont you take me for christ sakes I said now

Maybe I wont go cuz I was destined to be the best ? Doubtful

Cuz noone understands me like i was talkin with my mouthful

When I was born momma said lets keep it

Daddy said what is this

Twenty years later im developing mental sickness

To spit shit

Rawr and uncanny

Not fancy , dirty

f*ck whatchya heard ! Ya heard me ?

I move quick and shoot tips at kids with loose lips

So yu talking to ? Who you walking to ?

I lick shots when im standin right on top of yu

So yo im out , with no doubt

I kiss mine and yo mother with this dirty f*ckin mouth

-SKINnBONES

CHECK OUT MY SHIT ON AUTORAP

User = BeenRadical

[I Love That I Hate]

I like it guy ! Seen alot of improvement in your rhymes !

Very creative

Keep it up

[I Love That I Hate]

I like it guy ! Seen alot of improvement in your rhymes !

Very creative

Keep it up

[Quick Verse For Rap Compitition. Bb(Our Deepest Fear)]

Our Deepest Fear Is Not That We are inadequate

Our Deepest Fear Is That We are Powerful Beyond Measure

It is Our Light, Not our darkness that most frightens us.

 

 

 

Either i express myself or i live dead

sentence to 25 to life in this Muuhafkin head

is it something that i said or something that i did ?

cuz i cant seem to wake from this nightmare

scared to fight fair cuz they might stair

even though my problems are exactly like theirs

But They don't wanna hear it

but this page i wont clear it

Success i must be near it

Beacause i know i merit

someone to listen cuz the shit that i'm spittin

is iller than a mental condition

and realer than anything anyone has ever written

so when you see me , don't bother saying hi

cuz i'm too busy waving at my life as it passes me by 

Dont know what failing is , cuz i dont got the balls to try

maybe ill get one word in by the time that i die.

 

 

Could really use a few suggestion on content and structure

thank you

LyricallyGifted.

[Nasty Freestyle]

You don't wanna see me on your TV

let alone be me 

Cuz im as wack as Eminem's last CD

Told her eat me

Cuz last time we f*cked it was pure extortion

blown way outta proportion

had to use a coat hanger to give you an abortion

you can find me in the back of the club

in the alley ,shooting up or snorting

im talking illusion and distortion

till the police be reporting

he's dangerous ! He's Radical !

call the squad and tell em be tactical

We want him dead, not alive

i was too high to give five

so i gave one

f*ck You son

 

 

 

 

[Keep Dreaming]

Thanks man

[2 Freestyles !]

Im very iimpressed with both your verses i see alot of potential , still need to toghten up several line but al in all keep the omin !

[See It Through]

Thanks man  !

ill definetly work on it

 

hey this is the beat I wrote it to if youd like to take a look.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jrtAiZ9Mk4

[See It Through]

Thanks man , yeah im working on it , but the beat i am using is pretty choppy though

[Keep Dreaming]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IykuFXaK9zs

 

 

Fist Verse to My first Single

Hope you guys can really help me out with this one !

 

Dreams

 

 

(0:23)

can i kick it? can i bump to the rythm

spittin something a little different ?

do i need premission to , kick it to the children who

are driftin through thinking they should be gifted too

and lift them to , a new plautou just to let them know

that even tho the worlds looking kinda rough

sometimes the stars are looking up at us

and as the wolrd turns , so do we so dont be ,

so quick to judge, and on your journey for your dreams

dont forget to love.

cause she has hers and he has his

all meant to shine like little f*ckin kids (0:51)

But we keep trading in , our dreams for wages and bids

and im getting f*ckin pissed

Cuz We need to stay true to the dreams of our youth

cuz when tomorrow come you will still be you

So Try to keep dreaming without hitting snooze

So lemme hear you sing it , Cuz i know youve got the tools ! (1:08)

 

 

LyricallyGifted AKA Unknown

[See It Through]

Thanks man , Will Do !

[See It Through]

I've made it through

by payin dues

& staying true

aint sayin you

should do the same

cuz i haven't brought any fame to my name

but that's all about the change

cuz ill never let it go 

not to the day of my funeral

so listen to my spirit

and follow my soul

cuz everything above me

is now under my control

and to myself i owe

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One more time

more lines

more rhymes (4x)

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Call me a wannabe

cuz i wanna be 

the greatest MC

put an I in between

this is what i hold in my H-A-N-D

And i grip it closely

cuz its whats gunna take me

away from the system trynna shape me 

and i appreciate it greatly

cuz this world that im living in lately

just aint me

and the record button seems to instantly save me 

cuz the words always gave me 

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One more time

More lines

more rhymes (4x)

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[Take Me Away]

Rough draft , gonna record this one, let me know what yall think.

 

 

 

Yo as the times are changing, so are we

so where do you wanna go

who do yu wanna be ?

a f*ckkk it can yuuu,

 

Take me away , can you take me away ?

cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say

can you take me away ?

from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today?

so can yu take me away ?

 

 

Go out get a job get paid , collect minimum wage, is what they say

but i refuse to let the music fade

cuz i was made for this trade

so i get in the booth let loose, tell the truth

and i shoot and i spray

till it takes me away 

from the worries of tomorrow

and im stress of today

so believe me when i say

that i will not slave a nine to five

no way ill be working today so that tomorrow i can grind !

so im young and im fresh so expect nothing less 

than my abolute best when i rep and i rep

nothing more nothing less than myself and my crew

this is what i was born to be so this is what ill do

but the preassures of society

got me felling measured by anxiety 

so admire me

as i say fk you and my boss fires me 

 

 

Take me away , can you take me away ?

cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say

can you take me away ?

from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today?

so can yu take me away ?

 

 

Movin on to bigger and better things 

let the letter ring

hopeffully the chedar brings

not just wealth 

but help

to me and everybody else

but the fact

is that world dont work like that

wish it would bring us back

to the days

of barter and trade

cuz the currency's urgency is hurtin me

its gettin harder to pay

and its getting even harder to stay

so if its in a coffin or a cop car 

just bring me far from today

so its 1-2 1-2 for all you slaves

let me bring you as it takes me away

 

 

 

Take me away , can you take me away ?

cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say

can you take me away ?

from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today?

so can yu take me away ?

 

I might not survive

but its okay even if i die

cuz weather im dead or im alive

my words will remain in every track

fortified

bustin' 8-9 rhymes

every four to five lines

and thats enough for me

to sleep easily

when i close my eyes

and when im forced to rise

i can keep em wide

Bounc of the tide

and ride rhythms on infinite

not to say i did it

cuz i need the music ill admit it kid

i tried to get rid of it

but then between me and you

there was no difference

so in this intance it, all starts here

concious clear

kids block yo ears

to hear

no evil

time to show these people

i can bust a flow

but im lossin faith 

in the human race

so i pick up the pace

to let you know

that im ready to go

 

 

Take me away , can you take me away ?

cuz i uno wat else to do , i uno what else to say

can you take me away ?

from the struggles of tomorrow and the trouble of today?

so can yu take me away ?

 

[It Was Not Your Fault , But Mine.]

Intro - 

 

- this one goes out to all the women that ive  mistreated

 

 

 

Verse- 

 

 i apologize to those

of wich i shared laughs and woahs

invited them to walk on the same road

kept them close, just to cut them off cold

like the batender had been told

aint life soppoused to be gold

how come those beats grow rapidly old

rush poker , quick fold

hit a bold , cliff

leave them hearing sad riffs

Clutch than shift

and then thats it 

cause selfishly i didnt think youd fit 

but only later does it hit

shit , i fked up big , time

i only thought about mine

and i hate those of that kind

i cant go , and rewind

buti cant dismiss it , like Nevermind

cuz it felt right at the time

But as it grew , i thought of those that left me behind

and it kept me blind, so my heart tells me to apologize 

and define

with deep sincerity , of why i barely , treated you fairly

CUZ !

 

 

[Chorus]

 

as we search for love and its valuable touch

sometimes others get crushed

and we dont think of it as much

but it happens to every single one of us.

every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every

single one of us , every single one of us ,

every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every

single one of us , every single one of us ,

 

 

Verse - 

  

 i never forget , but i feel this sence of regret

cuz you didnt get , a fair explanation but yet

you kept , calm and let, me do me , instantly , set me free

still thinkking how i wanned you to kiss me

but what about the hesitation , i thought i did this carefully

but the destination , wasnt gonna lead to harmony

but your still a part of me, so pardon me , 

i didnt want this to be , a catastrophe Im sorry , Aly

i treated you badly ,  so you have the right to be made at me 

but here's where i explain why , i really did like you and i really did try 

but were just two different slices, from two different pies

and before i had a chance to speak , another woman caught my eye

and that is where my true feelings lie , today ,tomorrow

and until they die, so i hold back my tears i will not cry

cuz i like to think your a strong girl , and you will get by  

 

 

[Chorus]

 

as we search for love and its valuable touch

sometimes others get crushed

and we dont think of it as much

but it happens to every single one of us.

every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every

single one of us , every single one of us ,

every-every-every-every-every-every-every-every

single one of us , every single one of us ,

[Love Is A War - Uplift (Edited)]

Still unfinished but edited please let me know what you think !

 

Dan - Into - Verse 1- Verse 3 - verse - 5

 

Brad - Verse 2 - Verse 4 - Verse 6

 

 

 

[Not Enough]

Thanks man !

[A Piece]

here we go , here she flows, downstream she goes,leaving foes shocken from head to toe, everybody knows

she's rough around the endges but her intentions ain't directly negative but our perception lets us be decieved by the black and not the green we just trying to achieve greatness beyond relief , flip and turn over a new leaf heading out to never retreat , religions bullshit but it's a belief and this is what believe

 

since birth, we've all been cursed to prepare for the worst , so when we disapprove , try to get in our groove they try to move , us away fro the act , that tries to impact , the progression agaisnt the governments obsession of money and opression

 

 

 

 

[Not Enough]

I am Here and you are there , we make judgements that depend on where , the trends that we wear

then you defend to pretend like you compare, instead why don't we connect and share, to affect the impaired 

no communism but try and be fair , but people turn away to the sight of flair , I cant bare to compromise with those who tare and reject someone who may be needy its f*cked up and greedy, im not gifted but i feel lifted when I help and arm thats being twisted and it aint cost me a dime ,cuz we were all meant to shine , like children do, so this time, enough is enough , everyone's gotta be so f*ckin tough , try helping someone outta the rough, but nah that's INSANE cuz the gain aint ever enough.

 

- one who has lost faith

[Where Is The Love ?]

Diss me I diss back , I piss stacks , and tax the mutherfker that tries to impact my raps talking crap. Grab my pen and go full attack , step back with yur rymes that are wack. Infact they're garbage , rip you open and leave yu starving , for revenge wot the need to avange the fallen soldier cuz after yu im goin for all the others so go back home and hide under the covers , be a come back and hover kill yu n fk yur lover so peace before I release the noise of my toys ak 47 , its the big bad boys !

[Where Is The Love ?]

BOOM BOOM BOOOOM

BOOM BOOM BOOOOM

 

 

HERE COMES BIG BIG BRAD

 

He's so bad he'll eta the last food you had

 

but dont get mad , cuz i feed off rage , like my pen feinds for the page

living in this day and age , to get to the club, gotta slap 10 teens in face

i jus walk up with that ak , and spray like it's fkin d-day

better pray i dont bleed , or that i black out , and i dont see

cuz adrenaline spreads like desease , starts at the feet and moves to the knees

next thing i know i killed three , human beings , ima beast and just been unleashed

from the preasure of the police , and gunnning for my victim , so i can hit him

grap my knife rip him , just to warm up for the rythm , so i must kill him

i commit crimes , flip dimes, cut ties and tell lies cuz i despise the human race  (WHYYY?)

cuz we live a concious , tries to hold back from our so call nonsense but i gotta sixth sense

thats ready to dispense anger in every direction and spread the intense infection of doom and doubt

so foget the mess you once knew about , pick up and gun and figure something out , cuz the world as come to its end , its already over , so me and my glock stay best freinds

 

 

 

BIG BAD BRAD

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Cane & Crouches]

EMINEM DISS

 

 

EhYo I'M 40 !

 

listen while i flip scripts and twist wrists

i insist , that the old man gets dissed

for all the times he said he wouldnt resist

putting down the mic in his fist

looks like he lied about this

cuz he feels the arthritis every time that he spits

so let go its ova , nobody listen to old folks

no joke , 25 to life , hip hop still got

by the throat , i dont mean to mean but you said you was mean

now you've gonna all clean , try to bring the sunkissed head in the second lp

right after recovery , shit i though eminem was dead

but i guess he survived off what he was fed , went back to get all his old tools out the shed

but i seek lead , so here come the explosion , as soon as i aproach him he's frozen

grab a paper and split him open , no one wants to talk , so i have been chosen

waiting for my turn like the game was loading , no more oceans are exploding , and no more guns need loading

so put the mic down and stay off the court like mike. your time has passed so just enjoy life , cuz its big bad brad with a gun a knife , and hes pissed , so dont reply. cuz hes clocking out ,hes done his shift , ps eminem you a old lil bitch!

 

- Big Bad Brad