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Timbre

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  1. Funny--no circuitous logic going on!  I was responding to what I thought was the post immediately before mine, but my post was published  after something that was unconnected and then the next post just picked up where I left off. I've seen that happen a few times where there doesn't appear to be a connection between posts and it ends up that thread was broken because of some glitch or delay in posting. Now there is a connection that comes to mind, but this isn't the explicit posting section :) ~T

  2. Hi, Anon.

     

    Powerful start. Really pulled me in. The last couple of lines started to drift a bit, but I think you could pull them back in with a stronger lead in to "denier" and flipping the last line to end with "liar". Just my 2 cents.

     

    Hope you keep going with it. ~T

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