I m not sure what you are meaning when you say kick it to the children who. It sounds like kick it to , means to me , kick them to the curb , but the surrounding sentence makes me think that is not what you mean . I think you are wanting to imply, kickin it with, the children who.Also because everyone is gifted on there own unique way, the part where it says , "thinkin they should be gifted too, might be re worded somehow, a suggestion , maybe say thinkin there game is smooth or there being true or something other than thinking they should be gifted, cause again, everyone is gifted. O thonk this is a postive message you want to express and i like that idea