sonadora songs

Woow i really feel bad because I miss this criticism before i make my song.. thank you so much.. 👍

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your great editing to make it great song,, I am honored to get a note from a great critique like you. Thank you very much. What a great version of song you made 💗

thank you very much.. that is incredible and amazing edition,, really a talented an great poem,, i really wish i could write like such way of writing wow that is really nice and i think it would be a great song appreciate your help Lisa thankssssss

thank you very much,, you are really a great poet,, that is a great edition,, that arangnent is what should i started my poem with,, really appreciate your help

his is a poem, I wrote its lines to Sonadora. Sonadora is a great girl from a coast city, this city is known by its fountain, which it was recorded to be the tallest fountain in the world ( king fahad fountain ), Sonadora tweeted that she has a depression, She is suffering from it, so, to defeat it, she walks in the city ( Jeddah ), that city which has the tallest fountain. She tweeted: ((What I do to fight my Depression ? Well I walk for hours and hours in an open area with listening to my favorite music, This helps me a lot)) I wrote the poem, then I send it to the singer, the singer tried to make it short to fit the song. here I will post the poem nd the song: the poem: You could notice the poor of the language because I am not a native speaker, Also I haven't been in any English native language. So, forgive me. So, please, can you criticize this poem help me to make it great to be a good song? My best wishes