his is a poem, I wrote its lines to Sonadora. Sonadora is a great girl from a coast city, this city is known by its fountain, which it was recorded to be the tallest fountain in the world ( king fahad fountain ), Sonadora tweeted that she has a depression, She is suffering from it, so, to defeat it, she walks in the city ( Jeddah ), that city which has the tallest fountain. She tweeted:
((What I do to fight my Depression ? Well I walk for hours and hours in an open area with listening to my favorite music, This helps me a lot))
I wrote the poem, then I send it to the singer, the singer tried to make it short to fit the song. here I will post the poem nd the song:
the poem:
You could notice the poor of the language because I am not a native speaker, Also I haven't been in any English native language. So, forgive me.
So, please, can you criticize this poem help me to make it great to be a good song?
My best wishes