Colllins Osama

Hey, Your Rap Voice is so sick xD. And the hook is very good. I really like your flow its kinda unique. I hope to see more of you.

I think at some bars you had so much words in them that it didn't match up with the flow or/and beat. But I liked the lyrics and ur flow ate the 2 verse and at the middle of the first. Plus your hook is kinda catchy I like it😅💪🔥

Hey, I liked the way you flowed at almost everyone of these verses except of the verse 5 would have liked it more if u had kept the flow the same like in the first bar in v5. I love ur rhymes and how every verse has a very good stucutre and is as well on topic. Collins

Hey i maybe thought that some of you guys could help me improving my writing skill. So thats why I put my whole song lyric in this message: {Verse 1} 1.) I think so many people just talk shit/ 2.) So i put them on my f*cking hitlist/ 3.) It's the reason i got no time for chilling/ 4.) So i get bored and just start with killing/ 5.)Starting spilling blood like i am itachi/ 6.) Wanted to drive around in a pink caddy/ 7.)I will slaughter u all because i can/ 8.)Even witout having one single / 9.)I have a lot of things planed for the bitch u call mom/~ 10.) I don't know where this bar just came from/ 11.) But i know the dudes' mom i meant is mad now/ 12.) I am pretty sure he thinks that i am scared somehow/ 13.) So i just asume that he is a big coward/ 14.) But please don't underestimate my power/ 15.) Otherwise it won't be fun for you if we encounter/ 16.) I have a lot of reason to catch all of these snakes/ 17.) But it's so important to not even let one of them escape [Hook] 1.) I got no time for this shit 2.) But You just wanna shine a little bit 3.) But Your whole f*cking life is a skit 4.) And Like I said i got no f*cking time for this shit 5.) I got no time for this shit 6.) But You just wanna shine a little bit 7.) But Your whole f*cking life is a skit 8.) And Like I said i got no f*cking time for this shit {Verse 2} 1.) Everybody just started to hate me/ 2.) But I'll kill em bitch I'm on a killing spree/ 3.) Cause gathering all this hate helps me awake / 4.) The mangekyou sharingan with which i see your fate/ 5.) In which you will lose all of your mates/ 6.) Afterwards you will be calling me lord and savior/ 7.) Hope i won't be marked as a traitor/ 8.)Otherwise you will be all in danger/ 9.) But i don't care cause I am a slayer/ 10.) Always slaying every single one of them masturbator/ 11.) But maybe instead of slaying them try to talk/ 12.) But Bitch I alreday tried it didn't worked well/ 13.) Cause am a motherf*cking ghoul so you better move some steps back/~ 14.) Cause your attempts to ruin my reputation are so f*cking whack/~ 15.) But there is not much time to end this like the bitch you are/ 16.) So i will just end it with the next track which isn't away that far/ [Hook] 1.)I got no time for this shit 2.)But You just wanna shine a little bit 3.)But Your whole f*cking life is a skit 4.)And Like I said i got no f*cking time for this shit 5.)I got no time for this shit 6.)But You just wanna shine a little bit 7.)But Your whole f*cking life is a skit 8.)And Like I said i got no f*cking time for this shit I hope you could help me out cause its my first time writing rap lyrics and i don't know if they are okay at least. Would apreciate it. Thanks