Yes, thank you for the feedback. It seems most aren't willing to take the time to respond, so I appreciate this more thank you know. In the original version of the track, I did take on an angrier tone in the end of the song, which was ultimately cut. I think when I do record an album version, I will mix it up a bit. I know I should alter the singing but I guess was having trouble where to do so. Perhaps in the bridge I can be louder/angrier? Not sure, but will think about it.
Also, I did think it sounded fine with only piano because it seemed passionate, personal and raw. But also, I don't really have any other musicians to work with so it's always been just me, the piano and my voice.
Going into the studio soon to record another track called "Never Will" so I'll make that one better!!
XXJ