[Annabelle]

i wanted to share this song i made. 'annabelle.'

 

 

you took one look

at his supple skin

and couldn't wait

to sink your teeth in

 

and tear away at his flesh

to mend all those wounds

of your worn vest

 

annabelle, my annabelle

no i won't ever blame you

cuz if i were you, i would have, too

done the same

 

your mother made a fool of you

when she let all those men inside of you

she got to fill their lust

by telling you you'd better thrust

 

it wasn't until she left the house

that you made sure to seek all them out

 

but they never knew

just what you had 

lured them to

until it was too late

 

chorus

 

they locked you up

and sent you away

with no averment of foul play

 

but until this day

your name rings true

carved out in his skin..

[Scott Zareski - Dearth]

I also wanted to share this track I made. 'Annabelle.'

 

[Scott Zareski - Dearth]

Thanks for that. Yep, removing the bass altogether is something I will do to that track in the future. I used Logic actually.

[Scott Zareski - Dearth]

I'd really like to hear what people think of the music. What they like, dislike, strikes them, etc.

 

Thanks in advance <3

[Scott Zareski - Dearth]

Hey all, I wanted to share Dearth that I just put out into cyberspace along with a video I shot for one of the songs. I hope you enjoy it.

 

The songs are available on iTunes. This is all pretty new to me. I've had ideas in my head that have just been scratching

their way out for some time now, so this just the start of all of that.

 

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/dearth-ep/id969779311

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3w10XiaiU0

 

That's all for now. Thanks very much.

[Jason Scott Music - Nobody's Sin (Studio Single)]

Oh, hmm, sorry, I thought this was the proper category.

Thanks for letting me know!

Which is the correct one?

[Jason Scott Music - Nobody's Sin (Studio Single)]

Yes, thank you for the feedback. It seems most aren't willing to take the time to respond, so I appreciate this more thank you know. In the original version of the track, I did take on an angrier tone in the end of the song, which was ultimately cut. I think when I do record an album version, I will mix it up a bit. I know I should alter the singing but I guess was having trouble where to do so. Perhaps in the bridge I can be louder/angrier? Not sure, but will think about it.

Also, I did think it sounded fine with only piano because it seemed passionate, personal and raw. But also, I don't really have any other musicians to work with so it's always been just me, the piano and my voice.

Going into the studio soon to record another track called "Never Will" so I'll make that one better!!

XXJ

This has good potential in my opinion. It's a bit haunting and I can imagine the song can use some additional arrangements, but I can understand the leaving them out as well. The singing goes on and on the same way and really could use some variation to make the song more dramatic as I'm sure you intend it to be.

[Jason Scott Music - Nobody's Sin (Studio Single)]

Hey guys, I wanted to share with you my recently recorded track entitled "Nobody's Sin."

First and foremost, I'm a writer and the music comes secondary. It's always been that way.

Nobody's Sin:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gtg8aVgLaUM&feature=player_embedded

Also, here's a link to my YT channel.

http://www.youtube.c...sers/noaptebuna

Let me know what you guys think. Please subscribe/like the video as well.

XXJ