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I totally agree with Rudi, very chilling. These words paint a picture in my mind that is one of dispare, and of acceptance. What struck me most was that it was written in a way that doesn't convey self pity. Very good work in my opinion.

its hard to admit I am less than I thought I am less EXCELLENT!!!!!!!

Thanks John... you are too kind. Bob

Thanks John, as fate would have it I cannot seem to find the recording anywhere, so I am in the work of re-doing it... Bob

Thanks Steve... yeah, I had some anger, some hurt, some loss, mostly a great loss... a huge loss actually, one that took many years to overcome, but I knew I would overcome, thus the ending. Bob

Yeah, I guess we all have to let it out once in awhile..... thanks for the welcome. Nice place here....... Bob

Thank you kindly..... Bob

I liked this because it covered an often very dramatic situation in a very non-dramatic way, and besides that… it kinda fits my current life issue quite well. Bob

My friends at work like it... so they say, what do they know? Set to music with a reverse drum track.. my Morrison phase. Defiant Bastard Standing in the dust of the defiant bastard The scars of love written on your face seem connected You’ve chosen to mate with this killer and breed your offspring To cripple the good that lies in the heart of mankind Scorpion flesh bites in the night Washing away the you that once was Sanitizing the hollow shallow walls of your inspiration Your dreams of love now floating in a river of decaying hope As darkness falls the evil penetrates your soul Adding scar upon scar upon scar The clashing will soon begin to unfold As the monster emerges through the depths of night But we are not afraid For we shall stand and fight the evil that surrounds us And continue the battle that you have started And continue – until you are no more

Hmmm.... H H Got me wondering... thanks for the welcome.....Bob

Hahaha... yep... just one fan, but she's got spirit!!! Thanks for the welcome, seems like I found a great place here. Bob

Thanks John... just me, my bike and well..... yeah, it was a great time. Hope to have a new bike soon!!!! Bob

Thanks Steve.... so far this seems like a great place.

Thanks Amanda.... I used to ride motorcycle in the White Mountains... very nice.

Hey Tom... I live in Mass..... am about 30 miles from Hinsdale. Pretty close!!! Bob