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Dominick

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  • Birthday 07/17/1997

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  1. Hello everybody, my name is Dominick. I've been making lyrics since the summer of 2011. I'm new at it and looking forward to being great at it. I'm only 14 and I'm trying to get started at an early age. I want to learn guitar, piano, and drums.I have a couple songs that I'd like to share with you all to see if I am starting good and need work. I'm looking forward to having a music career. Thank you! I do songs about love, death, and religion. I also have high vocabulary in my lyrics Here's some lyrics of mine. Three different songs. "Your Heart, My Blood" "The Birth of my Death" and "Asylum" I sit there all night, waiting to help her I sit there all night, waiting to help her The crickets of the night tell me a prayer My heart tells me I can be her savior Why must I live without grace? When the adolescence of life is waning helplessly on unresolved conclusions Abolish the self-centered humans who walk this demolished planet without empathy For them, will not receive victory or failure They will receive no sympathy Death is the final conclusion : The entity of life lingers haunted sights Cold broken Asylum, his walls speak to me The children were hungry by the tremble in his speaking This isn’t any ordinary human hallucination Stark sights of the walls were nothing but ruination Cells run my brain without determination in this crucial exaggeration Thoughts and thoughts of the dead fill me with dread Dreadful considerations and anxiety morsels drop out like rain Red and black stain the sky with pure evil Visions of the devil make me shrivel No sign of life, holy, or heavenly Signs of hate, pain, sorrow, and hell fell like a rock down a well Giggles and teasing of the devil’s children were perceived from the walls I'm a Christian and the majority of the lyrics I do involve religion. Thank you much!
  2. Welcome to the forums Dominick :)

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