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Interesting, I thought.

At first a glib response, wittering on in futility

About life and lies, and inevitability

Digesting, I sought.

To reply in kind, with lyrical poignance

To make a point, without causing annoyance

Why? That's the key.

Love's a tricky thing, passionately flickering

Consumed and alive, with constant tinkering

Why? Don't you see?

Shallow, self-absorbed, a life without consequence

Better than others and full of self-magnificence

Love is confusion

Truth, an illusion

Hope, a delusion

Words all diffusion

Copyright 2nd August 2004

Welcome aboard!

Cheers

John

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Snowpants

I meant to say, for all it's simplicity they're thought provoking lines. After all, they made me want to write that little ditty. Thanks!

Cheers

John

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if we all say what we mean and mean what we say then:

why do lovers give up?

why are people shallow?

why are expectations of others most often seemingly

less important than our own?

Ah, but we don't, do we?

Would that it were otherwise

And we found the truth where lies lies

That we could express how we feel

And understand what is really real

Walk a mile in others' shoes

And admire the view of their views

(That's enough bad poetry -Ed)

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What you trying to say Alistair? Should I take up lymeric writing? ;D

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why do lovers give up?

why are people shallow?

why are expectations of others most often seemingly

less important than our own?

This is prose,  ;)

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No snowpants  :(

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And who's mr showoff? :-/

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