Turning Earth

[Mazrocon]

A short little poem about what goes through peoples mind when they write. Enjoy!



This poem has been deleted due to possible publication.

Edited November 2, 2014 by Mazrocon

[Alyricman]

I really like this poem... I can find myself in this poem. There are too many great lines. I especially like this:

''Unaware of the turning earth

My loved one's voice, just a sound

And maybe it's just to prove my worth

Flying high while still on the ground''

The whole poem is very well written! Good work

Edited August 13, 2010 by Alyricman

[Mazrocon]

Thanks lyricman! means a lot

Out of curiosity what is your real name?

~TIMOTHY~

[Alyricman]

My name is Milan

[Mazrocon]

Cool name... never heard of it before.

~TIMOTHY~

[ellenore]

I liked this too!

My favorite line is:

"At war with myself like lava and snow"

It really perfectly captures the thought process of a writer...or at least one that edits what they write

Really nice work, I love all of the poems you've written that I've read!

[Mazrocon]

Thanks for reading Ellenore! I'm glad you enjoy reading my work

Out of curiosity what other poems have you read by me?

~TIMOTHY~

[auralscapes]

'Turning Earth' could be the name for so many things - a band, a book, a movie - anything really - clever! So simple and so effective!

[Mazrocon]

'Turning Earth' could be the name for so many things - a band, a book, a movie - anything really - clever! So simple and so effective!