Hello

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I am wanting some help with some lyrics....I play in some bands and everybody always has positive feedback concerning my guitar playing but I never hear anything about my lyrics. I don't really get negative comments, just nothing at all. I ant my lyrics to be as exciting to people as my playing but don't know where to start. Right now I am writing a song a week to play at an open Mic night locally before I bring them to my bands...I am gonna post the lyrics here first and hopefully be able to improve them as well!!

Thanks!!

Joshua

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I wanted to add some of my favorite lyricists so people get an Idea of what I am after...

Craig Finn (Hold Steady)

James McMurtry

Bob Geldof

Nick Cave

James Murphy (LCD Soundsystem)

Aesop Rock

[john]

Hey Joshua, welcome to Songstuff

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Lyricist here!