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A Home Recording - This Might Be My First Commercial Single


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First impression: Reminds me of the band Little Wings and Dylan. Was it inspired by the song "Farewell Angelina?'

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Sounds good to my ears. But I happen to enjoy the sounds of Bob Dylan and Lou Reed, which is the feel that this song has. I certainly needs a little work but it has potential in the market for obscure music. I will be honest here and say that if comercial success is your goal then the melody on this track will not cut it. That being said, do not change the melody. Perhaps bring the guitar up some so that it sits well with the vocals. Perhaps add some harmonica or violin to it, if that is possible at all. In all, this is a good track.

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