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So calm, so serene, so beautiful;
like a sleeping angel from paradise.
A slumbering child;
symbolic of true love, of tranquility, of peace;
of all good things endangered.
Sweet dreams my child,
sweet dreams.
For tomorrow you awake.

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Short and sweet, I like it!

Thanks SAB :)

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  • 4 weeks later...

This is absolutely "Awesome"

 

Youth at it's most innocence.  Parental admiration oozing with love.  And, what will tomorrow bring?.

 

All put into a short poetic masterpiece.

 

I'm going to make sure my daughter reads this. She has given me grand children who are still babies.

She will love it.

 

Gotta go now.  Time to soak my feet.

 

Absolutely Awesome!

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  • 6 months later...

wow Jody. I forgot to click "Follow" on this one. Thanks for the read and compliment. Haven't seen you in a spell, I hope you see this.

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Straight to the point this is amazing.

Thanks Christopher, I appreciate the comment and read.

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  • 6 months later...

Hi James

 

 

I can certainly relate to this - it's good to keep it short before the little one does wake up!

 

...........and they all do look like angels when they're asleep  ;)

 

Jan

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Hi James

 

 

I can certainly relate to this - it's good to keep it short before the little one does wake up!

 

...........and they all do look like angels when they're asleep  ;)

 

Jan

Thanks Jan, I thought this poem was long forgotten :)

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