Artist Biography?

[zoelouk]

Hi there, 

 

I read about a million tutorials on how to write a good biography to send with your demos, and have spent the last two months writing many drafts. I finally wrote something I'm pleased with, and was wondering if someone here can read it and tell me if it's good enough?

 

Thanks,

Zoe 

[john]

Sure Zoe, if you can send it to me, or point me at it, I will be happy to give it a look over and give you some feedback.