Freestyle

[bronzerebel]

Like superman trying too decompose 6 feet under/

I'm just making too many blunders/

Somebody pass me my ear plugs cuz it's getting too f*cking loud trying to hide from all this thunder/

Like "the world is yours too discover"/

Bullshit, this world is mine too recover/

Mine to runaway from, mine to lose in the gutter/

Like "stop all of this fake shit and just show me your real colours"/

Real colours? Homie I'm just a shell of existence/

Rebel stop ignoring all the the voices in your head and just listen/

But why waste my time on something that isn't?/

I put my heart into this shit and I ain't get nothing back, wait isn't that an addiction?/

A broken musician with a survivalist mentality/

Down in numbers like warrior with no calvary/

Lois Lane in between the sheets after Clarke dies crying quietly/

Can somebody just take away my anxiety and replace it with a little immortality?/

Rocking back and forth; nothing but a rebel just looking for some notoriety/

Edited April 22, 2014 by bronzerebel

[justsoulin]

Hey Rebel, this sounds/reads good m8

[bronzerebel]

Thanks homie. Do you think if I took out "Rocking back and forth" it would read smoother?

[justsoulin]

For me, as a last line, it works with it, because it makes a break from all the above, makes the listener stop feeling comfortable and thinking they know what to expect next, before you finish off with "nothing but a rebel just looking for some notoriety"

[bronzerebel]

Thanks I just wasn't sure. Thanks for the feedback