hunger needs to be fed

[nigel lawry]

hunger needs to be fed

the truth that holds no bounds

is gonna be judged without a sound

by leaders so far removed from despair

for wealth has nothing to compare

the senseless suffering, the endless greed

lies told to mislead, we give fowl more feed

is it time to release the past

a new start is all they ask

don't ask for silence when it needs to be said

can't ignore the living dead, for hunger needs to be fed

the desert sands will always be red

for as long as hunger needs to be fed

Copyright ©2005 Nigel Lawry

[Hope4Peace]

hmmmm as usual i dont realy have anythin constructive lol, sry but i liked it!! its interestin, not tha usual style i go for but i dunno, i still liked it!PEACE!

Edited June 13, 2005 by bethers_is_my_baby

[Steve]

This looks OK till you get to the last two lines. Which look forced! I would reconcider those Nigel.

Nice sentiment.

[Rudi]

Im not sure that HUNGER NEEDS TO BE FED is a noble sentiment Nigel.

HUNGER NEEDS TO BE STARVED would be more apposite.

[Alistair]

I think both work though.

Nice one, Nige! (You've been quiet lately)