A Dramatic Turn Of Events

[Parallax5]

Part 2 of ? of Story of a Lifetime

The three crawl their way through life, learning all the while
They dream of fantasies never seen before and bury themselves in stories
Their lives a straight line are soon to change

The first learns of solitude through the disappearance of himself
The second learns of tragedy through the death of his own
The third learns of beauty through the birth of her kin

These feelings never felt brings them to tears
Tears of sadness or joy, a difference no one can see
These horrors will change their lives forever

The First:

I find myself alone in this cold city
Left to fend for myself by a cruel family
This terrible fantasy becoming more and more real

Why am I here?

I must find the answer to my questions
But how can I help myself if they couldn't help me?

The Second:

Why did he have to go away?
Come back, I never said goodbye
I never had the chance to see you live

These memories are not enough
I wanted more, but too little, too late
Nothing more can be done

The Third:

Such an extraordinary sight
How could anything bring such beauty to the world?
Everything changed, yet nothing seems different

Give me the chance to show him a better reality
A reality of happiness where dreams fly

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Narrator:

The twists and turns of life no one can escape
The cause of  happiness and sadness all the same
Never wrong and never right, we must face them
Face the angels and demons of a world of mystery and false truths

For better or worse, these changes will stay with them forever

 

I would like to know if this is an appropriate step in the story, considering what I am writing the story about, which is about life and all of it's mysteries and stories told time and time again. As well as that, I would love to hear any and all thoughts on The Third, since she is the only character I'm somewhat worried about being kind of boring. I have taken steps to change her, but her general feelings and thoughts remain, to a degree. Any other critiques are fine, and wanted.

 

You can find part one here: http://forums.songstuff.com/topic/41334-beginnings-tide/

[McnaughtonPark]

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[Parallax5]

Sorry about that