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The Distance

By 67nick
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67nick

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Don't you give me your world
And then take it all away
I get so lost and confused
My Darling,
While you are long gone
I'm still complaining to you
Of my tooth decay
I have become the distance
You put in-between
The moments that could have been
And those that were left to glean
Still hanging around in the dungeons
Created by the wraths of life​

Breathing Oh so carefully

In..........and out.............

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THEHOUND

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I agree...its not really bad but I like it better than others u wrote...keep it up...I see improvements u have been making

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