TAKE IT ON THE WING

[MPerry]

                          TAKE IT ON THE WING

gulls who will fly in full circle-stealthy overhead-they-in their frantic pursuit

search-for-that-purlescent flesh- of a coveted shell fish-laid bare-abandoned

along the beach using persistence-within a razored beak-one who-spills over

in the flesh- taken out -leaving the rest- to caw mockingly-restless-with their insult

coming in free flow-an echoed shrill-like or not -comes fallout-will it continue-have one

who stuns daring-ly-make others flee- break free-empty handed-birds please take note

or be kept at bay-in their futile attempt-they try or not-so keep up maybe fail- once twice

nor wrest it away- from the intruder who amongst them-is letting storm clouds stalk

gathered up-to circle above-ready to dive -n-dart-lose touch-in their confusion is this

an afront-which comes through-or wishful thinking-take it on the wing- or be singled out

leave it all to temper-in their argument-pitch it-a fevered-fervor-be blinded by-frenzied

scenarios over some which surely who continue on-till their lapsed hunger oer will it be

prolonged -overcome- seen too late- nor can it wait- on an empty stomach-if once more

with another try-delayed-can't stay-a wakeup call- for the weak-n-wearied-they who still

continue on-undetered in this food fight-unfairly kept by- a miscellaneous-scattering of

flocks-left in frustration let them break air-take it on the wing-to simply find some food

by Michael Perry

[THEHOUND]

wow..not my style..but who am I to judge.lots of good parts to this work..but still needs WORK...inspiration for me to do better aswell......thanks

[MPerry]

Hi Hound

 

Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate it!...have you posted anything?...looking forward to what kind of style or styles you relate to....will definitely comment when you post!...regards Mike

[THEHOUND]

I do have 1 love song and one rap u missed:))

 

[MPerry]

Hi Hound

 

Ok I will certainly take a look!...regards Mike